nice chapter and i like the cover update soon but i seriously think there should be a twist where her baby is still alive some how and that is the only reson she seens to care for darren coz the baby is lie a full vampire or something
omg omgomgomg omg omg omg omg omg gomg omg omg omg omg wow emotional she even tryed to be emo though there is no thing as emo theres hardcores goths and scenes that get called emo but arent emo and thers wanna be emos theres for no such thing as emo
If I woke up after being bit by that jerk Darren I would have killed him, well at least tried, I wouldn't of let him touch me or anything. I'd basically try to kill him with everything I had lol
omg ther should be some weird twist where the babys stil alive but its full vampre becuse of the venem with wolf trates ofcourse haha looks like luke acts like darren
YOU KNOW I WOULD RATHER BE A VAMPIRE, BUT THE WEREWOLVES ARE COOL, TOO, OK? I WOULD PERSONALLY HAUNT DARREN FOR THE REST OF HIS IMMORTAL LIFE IF I WERE IN THIS STORY. IS HE SO JEALOUS HE CAN'T FIND HIS OWN GIRL BECAUSE HE'S SUCH A JERK! AAAAARGH! *SMACKS VAMPIRE HEAD AGAINST WALL* THAT WAS SUPPOSE TO FRICKEN HURT! AND IT DIDN'T, SO MY ANGER IS NOT RELEASED! btw this means that was a good chapter, I'm not mad at you, just the characters.