Get real - Comments

awesome!

I really like this story. The mood and tone were exceptionally good; it's great how you don't make it as formal-sounding as other stories do, so it's more realistic and natural. I loved the metaphor about Neverland as well. Write more soon!

You're such a good writer.
:)

Just Wow

Nicee!
Your REALLY good at writing!
Awesome =)
onece again..
KEEP GOING!

hi there...I just wanna apologise for the last comment that was left, that was from my litle sister and to be honest i dont think she read your story so i have read a few chapters, and well found it different in a good way though.

I cant believe her mother was being so rude and but good on gwen for slapping her she deserved it.
this is well written and creative - i dont know what else to write LOL
But once again sorry for the comment my sister left she's a little whore!!

This is really good, and very well written, I love the teasers they are cool and that this story is orginal i like reading stories like that... coz its creative all your own idea.
i have only read a few chapters but am going back to read more :-)

I love reading this story =]
It makes me smile and gets me in the mood to write myself.

I just wanna have some kicks. I just wanna get some chicks. Rock, rock, rock, rock, rock 'n' roll high schoooool.

I love that song. As soon as I read the initial part I was like "THE RAMONES!"
Haha.
Vurrrry good update. I love this story.

Valium Freak:

yeah I've always wished I was Irish

:D i always wished i was irish too!
8) anyway, great update! hope she gets away with it...

You know I love your updates.
xD
There's nothing more to say other than it was really awesome.

yeah I've always wished I was Irish

good updates! I'm glad she's not so posh anymore.
Also, how dare her dad not like the irish!? Everyone loves the Irish!

wow. that was great! you've GOT to update soon.
and i love the way you put song lyrics in the story too. i haven't heard those songs in a looong time! now i'm gonna go brush up on my late 70's punk
*subscribes*

Nasty upper class people on the 70's.
>.<
Aye...they piss me off - upper class people of today, too that is.
Psssh.
Haha. anyway. That was a good. update xD

okay, i finished reading the fourth chapter and will read the next ones tomorrow cuz i gotta go to sleep now (stupid school *shakes fist*)
it's really great and i can't wait to read more!
i'm glad you told me about it =]

Le gasp!
That was really good.
Sorry I didn't read it earlier - I've been a little busy.

Wow! I like it

This story[the plot, characters, and theme] amazed me.

Having said that, you need to work a little on your grammer and there are a few spelling errors.

But I really like the originality I find in this story.
Keep it up.
:]

Good chapter, update soon

That was a good chapter.
I really like Blast. her character is really awesome.