Kaleidoscope Eyes - Comments

ohmygoodness
I'm happy that I decided to read this
Gosh, I'm such a slooowww reader D:

But, I lust this story, to be honest.
Yes, lust [;
lmao, (I need a lifeee)

update soon, cause I don't know how much longer I can go without knowing what happens next!

Gah your too amazing, both of the updated chapters I missed are amazing and I need to you to update soon. Ahhhh, love this story!!!

Throughout those 17 chapters i was so for Team John-ohh but after chapter 17 i dont know anymore.
I mean, she should be with Caleb because it would make sense but John has been nothing but amazing to her and she couldnt just drop him for another man.
I need to know what shes going to do!
I cant wait for the next update!

HAHAHAHAHA, you just made this one of my favorite stories. The visual of Zack pulling out a bag and saying that... man, it's golden.

Aweshome update :)

Woah, intense.
And Merrick wif weed... Now thats a sight to get used to. xD hahaha

I L O V E this story!

Still Team John and Team Daisy and Team Nike Dunk Gaskarth.

Soft-core? Alrighty!

=]

Nike Dunk with be the most swagged out baby alive!!! ha ha
and hun I think more Soft/Core porn will get you even more readers...
i think lmao. Anyways, I love the update so many cute ass parts.
I loved it, can't wait to read more!!!

I looooved the update!
And I'm totally down for some smut, just sayin~

Hah, awesome update :D
Nike Dunk Gaskarth = So true xD HAHA! lol

hmmm... soft core porn you say?.... Fine by me xD

Lol, your little comment about the excess readers of your soft-core porn made me laugh, that was golden. As was this chapter, can't wait to see how awkward shit gets with Mufasa (hahaha, loved that, too).

hahaha people are reading John Oh softcore porn. I loved the lion king comment because I had never thought about Caleb that way before.

Wow, that was intense and yay for Daisy. Lol Mufasa and Simba goes good indeed.
Loved it darlin I can't wait to read more, and oh YAY for john ohh porn!!! lol

Mother truckin' flapjacks on rage.. Caleb Caleb Caleb...

HAHA! I love that no one can swear around Daisy and if they do, they get a very entertaining smack in the head xD

HAHAH!! soft-core porn xD

Are you shittin' me? That little red-headed minx...

Wow, naughty naughty Caleb. Trying to steal another man's girl.
Can't wait for more.

WOAH!!!!!!!! A Pimp daddy, dude i'm cooler than I thought just missin my hoes whos up for it?!?!?! Ha! Kidding, anyways your amazing and I LOVE YOU. He he, My caleb is a giant train wreck. Theres always something in his pants that just pop out to you like a suprise if that makes sense...!?

Caleb's got a surprise in is pants!! Anyways, i looooove the update and Johnohs hole sexy beast rawr! Oh, Daisy daisy daisy. So um, yeah more CALEB because I love him. And that kiss he pulled at the end.... hes a sneaky sneaky bastard... like I said HES GOT SURPRISES IN HIS PANTS. Update sooon darlin. Sorry about my long comments too.... ha ha PIMP DADDY OUT!!!

TEAM CALEB FUCKING MICHEAL FUCKING TURMAN
(cause he's a bitchin ginger ;p)

whootttttttttttttt

weetziepigi:

It's really hard to pick between the two, but I'm gonna have to say Team John for now because there's just more of him being cute. Maybe you should put more Caleb in it and make it even harder to pick.

I also agree with this statement...

I vote Alex....hehehehehe