Kaleidoscope Eyes - Comments

hello team john hes cute even when hes not trying to be and hes been there threw Daisy's life and its cute that he actually treats her like his. : ]

I'm really enjoying your story. Team John.

It's hard to decide now, since it's still just the start of the story.
For now I'll pick Team John, because he's a cute daddy. (:
Loved the update.

FUCK, PEOPLE TEAM CALEB AND TEAM DAISY (even though there isn't any compitition for her, she's still adorable and i lurve you too :p) ANYWAYS, i loved the update. This story is amazing, and i love it and i love you for writing and i'just full of love right now he he. So yeah, ha ha TEAM CALEB CALEB CALEB. People you know you love that sexy ginger he he, update soon darlin!

KBAITHNX XD

weetziepigi:

It's really hard to pick between the two, but I'm gonna have to say Team John for now because there's just more of him being cute. Maybe you should put more Caleb in it and make it even harder to pick.

there is alot more of caleb to come, trust me.
now that the secrets out he's a major part of the plot.

It's really hard to pick between the two, but I'm gonna have to say Team John for now because there's just more of him being cute. Maybe you should put more Caleb in it and make it even harder to pick.

Team.....
JOHN
JOHN
JOHN
JOHN
JOHN
JOHN

he's better for her and Daisy!
I believe he deserves it and Caleb left in the dust!

:)

I'm glad that John is winning and I'm glad that Tinkerbell and Captain Hook are staying on tour! Team John

love it love it love it!!! mORE!

TEAM CALEB FTWWWWWW

haha Team John FTW
you can't deny the guy after the whole 'you'll always be her daddy' thing
well you can cause it's your story...but you get it

anyways, I like this story haha
it seems to have an interesting plot and I'm sure interested in where it's going

I am so team John!

team john all the way!
i love daisy, she's so cute!

love it!! more!:D

Well, shit. Cat's out of the bag now..

OH MY GOD!

He knows.. And he knows! :O

I wonder what'll happen...

Great update! :D i lovers it, your a famtastic writer btw :)

My heart is racin, i'm bouncin up and down on my computer chair, i've got a grin on my face, but a constant sound of 'awe's' coming from my mouth! Good lord this is my favorite chapter, holy hell dude they know! He knows! OMG! drama drama and more drama. You are completly and fantasticly amazing and I don't care if fantasticly is a word or not. I can't wait to read more darlin, whoo i'm excited. Now i'm going to read that chapter a few more times he he ;D

(Sorry for my long comments :[)

TO NEVERLAND!!! Ha ha, loved it once again.

omg drama. Peter Pan part was super cute omfg, please update soon.

omgosh no!
john! punch caleb!
and be daisy's daddy!
TEAM O'CALLAGHAN

love it!!!! More :D

Okay so first i am very happy caleb knows about Daisy, I also love nicely seasoned tacos ;D and Caleb a dumb fuck. I'm team turman no one say anything :/ ha ha, anyways I really loved this chapter and I hope you update soon cause I can't wait to read more :]