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  • all for believing.

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    Pretend made me cry. It tackles a feeling inside me that I've refused to acknowledge for a quite a bit. I thank you.
    May 17th, 2008 at 01:10pm
  • cheer up charlie

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    The Brendon. drabble was a nice one to read. No, not nice; nice is a poor word.

    This drabble was believeable.
    It was the type of writing that you could picture easily. And saying things like 'He buys Transformer bandaids and Spiderman bubble bath.' and 'He knows all the tricks for keeping the smoke alarm going off when he makes popcorn.', makes it seem very real.

    Real to me, anyway.
    March 24th, 2008 at 01:09am
  • oxford comma.

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    Brendon

    I like this Brendon.
    It was nice to read something sweet and fluffy.
    My favorite lines:

    kisses my fingertips when he doesn't want to say I love you.

    He knows all the tricks for keeping the smoke alarm from going off when he makes popcorn.

    in a Gatorade bottle filled with water next to the bed. He hides the newspaper when bad things happen
    February 12th, 2008 at 04:54am
  • folie a dru.

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    New drabble.
    Brendon.
    February 12th, 2008 at 04:20am
  • folie a dru.

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    CoOkIe_MoNsTeR66:
    wait!.......are they GAY?
    I LOVE THIS Story but im confused......
    Well, to start with it's not just one story, it's several.
    And I believe that the characters are gay in the majority of them, yes.
    February 7th, 2008 at 08:27pm
  • cobrastarfish

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    I really liked pretend (:
    February 7th, 2008 at 02:06pm
  • BreakDownnn;

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    wait!.......are they GAY?
    I LOVE THIS Story but im confused......
    February 7th, 2008 at 07:46am
  • oxford comma.

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    Pretend

    I like the bit about Santa.
    The shortness kept this crisp.

    My favorite lines:

    They'd lie about a man spying on us year-round and creeping down our chimney, but God forbid we lie about sneaking into the cookie jar. What kind of man spies on little kids year-round, anyway? Fucking pedophile.

    You smell like Skittles right now. But it's just pretend.
    February 7th, 2008 at 06:05am
  • folie a dru.

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    New drabble.
    Pretend.
    February 7th, 2008 at 12:06am
  • SilentWhispers_X

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    Oh my.
    That is a beautiful drabble.
    So broken but so wow :)
    January 26th, 2008 at 10:55am
  • i defy you stars.

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    i love the part in one of the drabbles about Ryan turning a children's drink into a suicide cocktail
    i dont know why, but it sort of got me
    like, it was childlike and innocent yet sinister

    sorry- i ramble
    January 17th, 2008 at 08:51pm
  • oxford comma.

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    Dancing

    I like the tone in this.
    My favorite lines:

    See the steam on the windows? I love it when you do that with your hips.

    Let’s get fucked up and go dancing. Let’s get trashed and go driving. Let’s get wasted and go party. We always end the night in your car.
    December 30th, 2007 at 12:20am
  • oxford comma.

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    Going Home

    My favorite line:

    Leave it to Ryan to make a children’s drink a suicide cocktail. There was some artistic merit in that, but at the moment Brendon couldn’t care.
    December 25th, 2007 at 12:25am
  • we are galaxies.

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    Wow.
    The power you packed into those 176 words was amazing.
    I want to go to hug Ryan and Brendon and make them happy.
    It makes my heart happy and sad at the same time.

    Leave it to Ryan to make a children’s drink a suicide cocktail. There was some artistic merit in that, but at the moment Brendon couldn’t care.
    The artistic balance of that was just... wow. It was like one of those
    morbid children's nursery ryhmes or something. Very, very good line. Favorite.

    Amazing job. <3
    December 24th, 2007 at 05:52am
  • folie a dru.

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    New drabble.
    Going Home.
    December 24th, 2007 at 05:45am
  • jesslovespanic

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    This was fucking gold.
    My favourites, Tedious, Harsh, Cut Me Up and The Amateur Photographer.

    I love this.
    I love your writing.
    You are, amazing.X
    December 23rd, 2007 at 02:16pm
  • cheer up charlie

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    Wow. I really like how you write (I read them all).
    Your writing isn't too 'flowery'.

    (: My favourites were Bullshit, Voice, Tape, Little Boy Lost, Attempts and Pinocchio.

    Attempts:

    “People don’t practice dying.” Brendon said, voice tight, words short, eyes overly bright.

    “I do.” Ryan turned back around, walking into their bedroom and lying down on top of the blue comforter. “I’m sick, remember?”

    ^ That line makes Ryan seem like a smartass. XD

    Wonderful.
    December 21st, 2007 at 11:10pm
  • folie a dru.

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    Pinocchio:

    I dont understand why Ryan couldn't speak... coz he's pretend? Make believe??? I'm confused.

    Please explain!!
    He could talk. But he talked like he was drunk.
    Because his brain turned off.
    I don't know why.
    It's just what happened to me at the time.
    December 17th, 2007 at 10:41pm
  • Frankie007

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    Pinocchio:

    I dont understand why Ryan couldn't speak... coz he's pretend? Make believe??? I'm confused.

    Please explain!!
    December 17th, 2007 at 05:34pm
  • Blooregard Q. Kazoo

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    Wow, I really loved chapters 7 and 12.
    If I wasn't on wireless right now, I'd probably be gushing about how many emotions these all got out of me!
    You're a fantastic author, Dru. :]
    December 17th, 2007 at 12:26pm
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