Chalice - Comments

How can this story not have ten stars already?
Seriously people.

I really love this.
Like really really love this.
Don't like Tina though, she sets me off.
But other than that, fantastic.

News. fucking. flash.
I love you.
Wait, that wasn't news. That was just your average run-of-the-mill FACT.
Right...

I feel like Tom secretly is a pissant about the whole thing, and he's just not saying anything. Or perhaps Bill is going to take the estrogen because he's curious, and then something is going to happen that will make Tom a pissant.

The home movies were a great touch. I loved them.
And I for one would love to see the pictures Tom took. Especially that last one.

*happy dance* That was awesome!
Teehee, poor Georg can't work the camera right!=P
The 'Bill Being Stupid' video was so funny!
Drunk Bill is so silly and amusing! =D
I thought Tom was going to be really mad at Bill, but he didn't which kind of suprised me.
But yay for no fighting!!!

I love it!
Thank you, thank you, thank you for updating.
I've been waiting very unpatiently for what feels like forever. =D
And taking time out of writing a media essay was worth it.
Update soon, I'll be waiting!
<3

*Runs off to finish essay*

Luvs this story and it's awesomeness!! XD
Bill is in so much trouble when Tom finds out!!

So I started reading this yesterday and I'm not much of mpreg reader...like you said it's completely illogical and sort of stupid...but this story...I'm in love. It's awsome. Though my brain keeps going. "Bad Bill...you're gunna be in so much trouble.' lol like he's a puppy. But my question is how is Bill going to hide the scar you said it's directly below(?) the belly botton...Tom will surely see it when they have sex...which they don't seem to be in any shortage of..lol...and I would think tom would suddenly freak if Bill out of no where asked him to where a condom...I would think it would tottally give Bill's little secret away. If he is in fact going to keep it a secret....though if he doesn't then I'm Tom will be angery anyway...ooohh....I'm excited about this story I'm hooked. SUBSCRIBE! hehee. Anyway I'll stop rambling. This awsome...just like everything else you write. I love you, your stories rock my world.

I should read this, but I'm too lazy.
-runs to write birthday sex-

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND...I love you.
End of story.

Hokay, so basically...Will and Grace has been one of my favorite T.V. shows since I was like 12 years old, and I am OBSESSED with Jack.
Relating Tom to Jack is win for me.
I still cannot wait to see Tom's reaction when it happens. And I feel like Bill's disease is going to make his period a fucking NIGHTMARE.

I love it. Once again - so well thought out.
Can't wait for more!
Although for some reason I have a bad feeling about Tina. Probably wrongly though...
-xo

I want Bill as a teacher! :tehe:
Nice reference to the current economic situation, by the way :] I'm such a history nerd.
Anyway, great chapter. My internet's about to go so I don't have time for a long review, but I promise you will get one eventually :)

I loved this chapter.
I think it's cool how open Bill is with all his students. Too bad teachers really aren't that cool. lol.
Although, I do have a bad feeling about the next couple of chapters.
I hope Tom can forgive Bill about getting the operation.

cute upodate

I usually hate twincest... with a passion.
But yours is just addictive.
I love how it's not just a freak accident thing where Bill gets pregnant. That's stupid but it seems you have put a lot into making this accurate. I also love the futuristic setting and your description of what's happened between now and then. It actually seems like something that would happen.

What my mindless ramble is trying to say is that:
1:I love, love, love it.
And 2: I cannot wait until you update again. I am definatly subscribing.
=D

I think it should be Bill's brother. I mean you know, so Bill has someone to go to for support and maybe Andreas can change Tom's mind in a way. Well that's just what I thought. By the way I've read all your stories and I'm not a fan of Twinsets but your a really big exception all your stories are great. Can't wait for more chapters on all your stories!.

Oh my gosh, this seems amazing. I normally passionately hate mpregs, but since this has a storyline and a reason... you've got me hooked :]

Can't wait for the next part - and I agree with the poster above, Andreas would be great as Bill's brother :]

I just love this story!
I like how it's not like "Oh hey, I'm a guy, I got pregnant."
Because really? That's not very realistic.
But since it's placed in the future....Well anything can happen.
And, I would have to say Andreas should be Bill's brother because Tom is obviously going to freak out about Bill's decision, and Bill, being the pregnant one, if he is going to become pregnant, is going to be very over-emotional, so I think he's going to have to have someone to lean on while Tom's upset at him.

Tom needs someone to keep him on track and in control when he freaks out, which he INEVITABLY will. I'd say for that reason specifically Andreas should be his brother.
Bill would, without question, be the coolest history teacher ever. I seriously think that interactive history lessons are the best kind, like that one movie where Ryan Reynolds takes them to do an Indian tribe ceremony, and a civil war reenactment, and several things where the students learn and don't realize they're learning because they're having so much fun. Bill sort of reminds me of that character. :D
Plus, that situation with Janny showed that he was a compassionate guy without having to explain anything.
I'm a little nervous as to how Tom is going to react when he finds out about Bill's procedure. :/

This is a really great, inventive, original plot, but I find myself...well, having mild difficulty getting over the whole pushing a baby out of your butt thing.
I mean, it's really well written so far, and I like how you put it in the future and gave some really good background information, and we'll see if it settles with me in later chapters, but I must say I'm a little...I don't know, perturbed seems too strong of a word here...do you get what I'm saying?

I'd really like to see this get continued, and I've never really given an mpreg a shot before, so you should feel honored that your writing is good enough to steer me towards something so out of my comfort zone as far as reading.

Hmmm pregnant men......well my parents are constantly telling me to try new things!!!