Smooth Criminals - Comments

Great update!

Aw, man! Great drama, though I'm rooting for her to get with Michael...XD

Wow that wasn't really expected. That's what I call a twist. lol :D So what's gonna happen now??

u have to update a.s.a.p. this is awesome!

I may be throwing another celeb into the story. Just a heads up. ;)

I love the two character mix of Johnny and Michael...though the random performances are weird, in a good way though, a different approach I guess.
Haha I was sorta voting for Johnny to be her man, but Mike is just as good; they're both good!

YAY!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!

Oh my god. That's so original, and I'm so lucky I came across this story. I love both Michael and Johnny.

I only read till the 2nd chapter, but I needed to tell you that.
I lovelove it.

I love this story

Thanks so much. It's much appreciated. :)

I loved that the update was long :)
This was a great chapter. It's very important that when describing the music video that you don't make it sound like you're just telling it, you have to make it apart of the story, and you did! I loved it.
Update when you can.

Thank you all so very much. :)

I have just read it all today, and I have to say it is pretty amazing.
Not something I was expecting with an MJ story.
I'm very excited to find out where this story will lead and I will be subscribing :)
Update when you can.

Thanks for the update bombardment :D:D lol
Hmm i think i'm loving this whole excitement going on with plans and stuff.. I'll be waiting for the next update :D:D

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! cant wait for the next chapter

Ooo. I guess things will get complicated with these two men.. Which one will she fall in love with?? or both maybe..??
I realized I'm really looking forward to your updates. And thanks for more Johnny. lol

I loved it. Again.lol
Though I still want them to finish that kiss. I'm curious and I can't imagine what will happen. Which is a good thing.
Great chapter and of course I'll keep on reading

YAY!!!! I WANT MORE!!!!

i love this story!!!!! i cant wair till u put the next chapter up ^_^

Thanks for updating Lyss!! I still love it!! I hope you pursue it! :)