That is my all-time favorite Michael Jackson video! You did a great job writing this. I love the "queen of the whores" comment, haha. Please update soon, this is awesome!
I'm going to try my best to have another chapter up this weekend. Normally when I make a chapter for one story, I have to make one for the others. Luckily, I already made one for Gone and now I'll have the time to make a new one for this without worrying about Gone. My goal is to have it up by Sunday. If everything goes as planned, it'll be up. Stay tuned.
Michael Jackson and Johnny Depp being criminals makes me laugh so hard thinking about they are two of the sweetest people to ever grace the earth :lmfao Seriously though, this is the coolest story! I love the title, love the plot, love the style. I am definitely subbing. Write more ASAP, eh? ;)
Okay, so I may not have had time to make a new chapter. I might if I feel the need tonight, but I was able to make a playlist featuring the song Smooth Criminal. So, I hope you like.