Smooth Criminals - Comments

Whohoo update!! I totally love this story.. I'm really curious about how it will progress with two men and a pretty woman you know. Thanks for the update! Loved it.

THANK U!!!!!!! SWEET CH UPDATE

Alright, so I haven't updated in a really long time. i'm thinking about doing it next weekend so, stay tuned. :)

Thank you all. I'm so happy you like it. :) Updates will be whenever I have the time, which is mostly never, but I will try my best to change that.

Awesome updates! I like the way this flows and the direction it's taking right now. Can't wait to read what happens next :-)

I loved it Lyss. I also like that you now have to wear a dress and actually be a girl!!! Hahaha.... so anyways.... I can't wait til you update your story over Christmas break.

Wow thank you :D:D Definitely enjoyed it!! Hmm i am looking forward for them to finish that kiss...lol
Yeah I agree smoothest of the smooth. haha Now that's true! :D

Looove. <3 Oh come on girl, you need to kiss him already! You're killing me here! lol. Michael is the smoothest of the smooth indeed. ;]

they almost kissed ^^ i loved the chapter! can't wait for the next one!

I'm so happy you finally updated! This is beyond awesome, please update soon. :)

i have never seen any story's like this one ^^ i love johnny depp and Michael jackson, but i like michael more xD please update soon!

Yay update! Thank you so much! Loved it. You know what i am really excited for some romance :D:D

The duo just melted my heart again. <3 Thank you so much for updating! You made my day. <3

thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alright. If I have time tonight, I will write a new chapter. That's a promise to you people.

I NEED CHAPTER 5!!!! PLEASE!!!!!

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I love it so far. Not many people would think to pair up Michael Jackson and Johnny Depp. Keep it going!

Well, not many people are obsessed with both of them. :roll: Thanks for not being a hater.

I am definitely obsessed. God, I thank you so much for brining this story into the world. Woop! Michael can sooo outrun those gunshots. He's a smooth criminal. ;D

If I get an antivirus for my computer, I may be able to have one up this upcoming week. Otherwise, I'll...we'll have to wait. :tehe:

I'm so glad that so many people like this. This is my first fan fiction and I take it I am doing a good job. Thank you all. I don't know when I'll be able to make another update. I unfortuanately don't have the time, so I guess the suspense will rise. :tehe:

I read the whole story now. It was great. Haha I would've never imagined Michael as a criminal. lol
And considering that I love both men, i'd hope that this story continues:D:D
Can't wait for another update