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  • starid09

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    Great story :). I hope you update soon.
    July 12th, 2009 at 03:25am
  • Smooth Criminal

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    Just a quick update...In some upcoming chapters I will be putting video links up so that you can watch the video. You'll understand more when I actually do it.
    July 11th, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • Smooth Criminal

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    Disney_Bby_123:
    Ahhh!!! The second chapter!!! I loved loved loved loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
    Ha ha. Thanks so much!
    July 11th, 2009 at 02:15am
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    Ahhh!!! The second chapter!!! I loved loved loved loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
    July 11th, 2009 at 02:13am
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    Disney_Bby_123:
    Cool story...I like it, is there going to be any kind of romance between any criminals??? And wen is the nxt update go n 2 b??? ^_^
    Yes, there will be romance. Naughty That's exactly why it's in the genre. If I'm lucky, I'll be able to make one today.
    July 10th, 2009 at 11:08pm
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    Cool story...I like it, is there going to be any kind of romance between any criminals??? And wen is the nxt update go n 2 b??? ^_^
    July 10th, 2009 at 10:39pm
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    VirmiciousOne:
    I love it so far. Not many people would think to pair up Michael Jackson and Johnny Depp. Keep it going!
    Well, not many people are obsessed with both of them. :roll: Thanks for not being a hater.
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:24am
  • VirmiciousOne

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    I love it so far. Not many people would think to pair up Michael Jackson and Johnny Depp. Keep it going!
    July 8th, 2009 at 08:12am
  • Smooth Criminal

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    Whore house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why can't you be the one in the whore house!!!!????? That better change real quick!!!!!!
    I'm sorry. Do you want to be stuck in a house sewing clothes and not being paid? I think not.
    July 7th, 2009 at 10:25pm
  • musiclover26

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    Whore house!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why can't you be the one in the whore house!!!!????? That better change real quick!!!!!!
    July 7th, 2009 at 10:16pm
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    klutz.of.ishpeming:
    I have always thought about what if Ann and Diane were whores.
    I like how you started it!!!! ;)
    Lol...I only put that in there because in Michael's song, Smooth Criminal, he's in a whore house and he's singing the song and the name Annie is in it. He also sang Dirty Diana. It's a shame that there's not a song with our names in it. Cry
    July 7th, 2009 at 05:54am
  • klutz.of.ishpeming

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    I have always thought about what if Ann and Diane were whores.
    I like how you started it!!!! ;)
    July 6th, 2009 at 11:06pm
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