I love Brooklyn's personality, I don't dislike anything about the story, and your writing sounds mature enough :]
May 11th, 2010 at 01:28am
Okay... Well heres something I hate. I hate that I can't find anything to dislike about your story even if it's just one lonely spelling mistake because I really wanted to please you and give some constructive criticism. Trust me I tried. I went back to chapter one and skimmed through the whole story looking for something, ANYTHING! But alas my dear I came up clean.
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- -What's one thing you hate, or dislike, in this story?
-What's one thing you love?
-Does my writing sound mature enough?