When I´m reading, I forget that your only 13...I mean seriously It sounds like it was written by someone older. And the fact that you wrote part of it when you were only 10. Gawd I wish I was able to write like that when I was 10. I have no doubt that you are going to be an author one day.
Loved it :) Really I did. I feel bad about leaving short comments, but there's not much I can really say besides that I like the story :D no...love it!
im going to kill you Bi I cant believe you left that evil cliffhanger omg she was stolen duh stupid me for not guessing sooner omg this was awesome i love it update soon