this is a great story! :) maybe try and stick to the same person at times. because I noticed a change in the recent chapter? E.g. "I" changes to "Sara". But nonetheless, amazing work
thanks StolenHeart. I've actually had a family death last week. So, I have momentarily taken a break from everything, which means my school work has backed up. As soon as I have free time, I will update. Unfortuntly, that doesn't happen very often anymore. I am now advertising and promoting on my 2 blogs. Thanks.
maybe try and stick to the same person at times. because I noticed a change in the recent chapter?
E.g. "I" changes to "Sara".
But nonetheless, amazing work