August 10th, 2009 at 08:16am
I'm lovin' it. Some scenes do seema bit rushed, though; don't be afraid to ease into the storyline slowly. Aside from the occasional spelling stuff (ie, "Rapping" as opposed "wrapping" ), this is really good.
And Danteeeeeeee`. I adore this guy already. Almost as much as I adored the little fang innuendo. XD
Editing to add: Puccini! Whoo!
I'm done now. Great story. :P
can't wait for more! and i agree wit the person above, dante is adorable lol
keep writing!