Are You Sure This Is My Life We Are Talking About? - Comments

  • heartbreak recs.

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    haha i love it!! its a great story so far lol
    can't wait for more! and i agree wit the person above, dante is adorable lol
    keep writing!
    August 10th, 2009 at 08:16am
  • Number 24601

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    I'm lovin' it. Some scenes do seema bit rushed, though; don't be afraid to ease into the storyline slowly. Aside from the occasional spelling stuff (ie, "Rapping" as opposed "wrapping" ), this is really good.

    And Danteeeeeeee`. I adore this guy already. Almost as much as I adored the little fang innuendo. XD

    Editing to add: Puccini! Whoo!

    I'm done now. Great story. :P
    August 10th, 2009 at 01:01am
  • CallMeKayla

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    haha
    it will have scenes, dont fret
    August 9th, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    explicit... i would like to think so... cc: cc:
    August 5th, 2009 at 03:08am
  • CallMeKayla

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    yay!! Thank you! :)
    August 5th, 2009 at 01:31am
  • aquarian_lotus

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    i love it.
    Clap
    August 5th, 2009 at 01:02am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    cc: Like it. Smile Yes :brightside: :con:
    July 25th, 2009 at 08:01am