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  • Kismet

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    Gasp! I think I just fell in love with this story =)
    July 26th, 2009 at 01:53am
  • Ultraviolet Light

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    I'm guessing Craig raped her or something along those lines?

    Is he a relative?

    Good story. I subscribed,
    Thats what I was thinking too!!!
    Grat start!
    *subscribes*
    July 24th, 2009 at 12:20am
  • littlemisslonely

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    I'm guessing Craig raped her or something along those lines?

    Is he a relative?

    Good story. I subscribed,
    July 17th, 2009 at 05:25pm
  • nalajess

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    LOVE IT! can't wait for more :)
    July 15th, 2009 at 04:44pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    loving this so far!
    I cant wait to see where you go with it! :)
    July 12th, 2009 at 06:34am
  • finallymoving.

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    I like it so far!
    July 12th, 2009 at 06:27am
  • Pseudoheart

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    hahahahahahhaha thats sooo funny !!! Lol MORE PLEASE !!!
    July 12th, 2009 at 05:15am
  • clemsongirl26

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    This is really good!!! I can't wait to see how it plays out....especially with Lana and Brian.

    Wonderful start :) Looking forward to more!
    July 11th, 2009 at 04:34pm
  • SillyFrench

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    Yeah for a new story :)
    Loved the first chapter, can't wait to read more!
    July 11th, 2009 at 12:29pm
  • fuzz!

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    NEWWWWWWWWWWW STORY?????? YAY! Why on earth did you negelct to tell me about this, Ang?

    Hmmm... So Craig is a douche bag, I can already tell that. I don't like him. He molested her, didn't he? I understand why she doesn't want to tell her family if that's really what happened though.

    "I think it’s a common male trait to be unobservant and oblivious."

    That's actually true. My dad's that way as well. haha

    I couldn't help but get annoyed when her parents were asking her about her weight and the diet thing. My grandma used to always think I was on a diet or whatever. It was obnoxious! Even if she has lost weight, they don't need to bug her about it. Especially together because then it just feels like you're being attacked.

    Bri-Bri!!! She doesn't like him? Wait, Brian made her other school years hell? No way! He would NEVER do that. haha I like mean Brian. He's sexayy. :)

    And Lynn's dating Zacky. Of course. haha

    Well, can't help but feel bad for Alana. I hope things look up for her. I'm sure Brian will help her out in a few chapters. haha I love this story and I can't wait for moreeeeeeeeeee!
    July 11th, 2009 at 01:05am
  • better.than.sex

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    oooh! i am really diggin this beginning!!!!!
    more soon yeah:)
    July 10th, 2009 at 07:55pm
  • Sweet Indecision

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    I really love this so far, can't wait to read more :D
    July 10th, 2009 at 04:58pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    so lana was put on this earth to give god a good laugh. he's a cruel dude that being.
    Ahahaha! Sorry, I found that highly amusing...

    Anyways, interesting start. High school story.. I enjoy those :)

    Wondering what exactly happened to her... though I could take a guess, I'd rather just wait and see :)
    July 10th, 2009 at 04:49pm
  • Music...and...Poetry

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    Oooh I love this!!!
    Even though Lana was the name of the school bitch at my school.
    What Brian is to Lana now, Lana was to me times a zillion. XD
    But awesome story, can't wait for more.
    Update again soon!
    *subscribes*
    July 10th, 2009 at 02:50pm
  • Freak Out

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    so lana was put on this earth to give god a good laugh. he's a cruel dude that being.
    July 10th, 2009 at 06:51am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    hehe the things you do for me!!!
    I love you though!!!
    and I'm totally loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 10th, 2009 at 05:44am