Hidden Within - Comments

Gasp! I think I just fell in love with this story =)

Krystal-Khaos:

I'm guessing Craig raped her or something along those lines?

Is he a relative?

Good story. I subscribed,

Thats what I was thinking too!!!
Grat start!
*subscribes*

I'm guessing Craig raped her or something along those lines?

Is he a relative?

Good story. I subscribed,

LOVE IT! can't wait for more :)

loving this so far!
I cant wait to see where you go with it! :)

I like it so far!

hahahahahahhaha thats sooo funny !!! Lol MORE PLEASE !!!

This is really good!!! I can't wait to see how it plays out....especially with Lana and Brian.

Wonderful start :) Looking forward to more!

Yeah for a new story :)
Loved the first chapter, can't wait to read more!

NEWWWWWWWWWWW STORY?????? YAY! Why on earth did you negelct to tell me about this, Ang?

Hmmm... So Craig is a douche bag, I can already tell that. I don't like him. He molested her, didn't he? I understand why she doesn't want to tell her family if that's really what happened though.

"I think it’s a common male trait to be unobservant and oblivious."

That's actually true. My dad's that way as well. haha

I couldn't help but get annoyed when her parents were asking her about her weight and the diet thing. My grandma used to always think I was on a diet or whatever. It was obnoxious! Even if she has lost weight, they don't need to bug her about it. Especially together because then it just feels like you're being attacked.

Bri-Bri!!! She doesn't like him? Wait, Brian made her other school years hell? No way! He would NEVER do that. haha I like mean Brian. He's sexayy. :)

And Lynn's dating Zacky. Of course. haha

Well, can't help but feel bad for Alana. I hope things look up for her. I'm sure Brian will help her out in a few chapters. haha I love this story and I can't wait for moreeeeeeeeeee!

oooh! i am really diggin this beginning!!!!!
more soon yeah:)

I really love this so far, can't wait to read more :D

Town House Terror:

so lana was put on this earth to give god a good laugh. he's a cruel dude that being.

Ahahaha! Sorry, I found that highly amusing...

Anyways, interesting start. High school story.. I enjoy those :)

Wondering what exactly happened to her... though I could take a guess, I'd rather just wait and see :)

Oooh I love this!!!
Even though Lana was the name of the school bitch at my school.
What Brian is to Lana now, Lana was to me times a zillion. XD
But awesome story, can't wait for more.
Update again soon!
*subscribes*

so lana was put on this earth to give god a good laugh. he's a cruel dude that being.

hehe the things you do for me!!!
I love you though!!!
and I'm totally loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!