Hidden Within - Comments

update this story! please! I got back on mibba just to check on this story

I hope this story gets updated. I miss reading it.

I am very excited to see you are updating this story! Please do it again soon!! :-)

I am in love with this story. It's so dang good! Haha. Alana and Brian have such a refreshing and realistic relationship. I love that they don't jump into a relationship, a real one anyways, right off the bat. I can't wait to read more, and I am looking forward to seeing where this goes. :) Please update soon!

I can't believe I forgot to comment after reading the update... Shame on me. I really love the relationship between Alana and Brian. I've been wondering since chapter one if Alana will tell anyone what happened with her cousin over the summer. I also wonder if her cousin will make an unwelcome appearance at all. I love how you write all the relationships between the characters and how I can easily visualize what's going on at that particular moment. I hope you do continue to update so I can see if my questions will be answered at some point in time. Keep up the excellent work, I enjoy your writing and this story a lot.

Awww I wish they would get the shit together and kiss and real date!

Awe they are so damn cute!

I was so stoked to see that this was updated. This is probably my favorite Avenged story. The update was definitely worth the wait. :)

awesome awesome awesome! I loooooove this and that last part was adorable xD I see some "vibe" between them, that's for sure ahah

So I just read all 16 chapters in a day lol I like this a whole lot! Please keep it up and update soon!!!!

please continue this story? (a)

Sooo... is there any point in hoping that you'll update anytime soon? :)

Loved the update ( I'm a bit late haha ) I just love the tension in this story ^-^

Huh-oh... trouble in paradise... ~
As always, keep up the good work! Can't wait to read more =)

I just started this story yesterday and I love it!

i can't wait to read the next update

Just reread the whole thing! I hope that you'll update slightly faster than last time :) My new favorite story!

wow, i had totally forgotten the awesomeness in this story :)

I just returned to Mibba after a long while, this was one of my favourite stories and it was about half the length of what it is now :) I just re read the whole thing and I love it so much! I don't know if your going to update it anytime soon but if you do I will be reading it :D it's fantastic

super cute story! :D