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  • eliscima

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    i love it but you need to try to use other words besides "shaking with fear" and the like

    good story though
    September 11th, 2009 at 02:35pm
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    i love it
    September 10th, 2009 at 11:42pm
  • mello2727

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    Very good story =) Please continue!!!
    September 10th, 2009 at 01:16am
  • bloodravyn

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    loved
    September 9th, 2009 at 06:19am
  • secrets-that-die

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    zachy saved her
    :]
    September 9th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    so does this mean that she is a vampire now?
    hope you update soon
    <3 Michele
    September 9th, 2009 at 01:01am
  • AwkwardMonster

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    WHY MADDY?! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!?

    anyways, emotional breakdown over. Yaaaaay! Updaaate! more pleaase morre!
    September 4th, 2009 at 06:08am
  • secrets-that-die

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    She attacked kayla?!
    loved the update
    September 4th, 2009 at 02:40am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    wow! Maddy's POV was written extremely well, not that the other part wasn't
    but that was amazing
    i can't wait for more
    <3 Michele
    September 3rd, 2009 at 09:47pm
  • Second Heartbeatxx

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    Chadyxoxo:
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    this was my favorite chapter ever :O
    LOL and if anybody has played the video game Left 4 Dead, i totally pictured Matt as the Tank

    "Just as he was about to reach us a flaming piece of cement hit him, and he fell to the ground, shrieking in pain"

    LOL i cracked up over that ionno why x]

    and sdvhnjskdfvhb MADDY!!! i hope she will be okay D:
    HAHA! I love L4D !! xD I now have a new thought about what Matt looks like when he fights xD Update more please!
    totally dude!! :'D *high fives* XD
    September 3rd, 2009 at 07:14pm
  • Second Heartbeatxx

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    dayum!!!!!!

    poor kayla i'd be freaking out D:

    was it matt that stopped maddy? i think so.. i hope they are both okay
    September 3rd, 2009 at 07:13pm
  • bloodravyn

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    eeeps!!!
    omfg!!!
    did maddy kill kayla?!
    September 3rd, 2009 at 11:11am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Loved it!!
    <33
    September 1st, 2009 at 01:22am
  • AwkwardMonster

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    Second Heartbeatxx:
    this was my favorite chapter ever :O
    LOL and if anybody has played the video game Left 4 Dead, i totally pictured Matt as the Tank

    "Just as he was about to reach us a flaming piece of cement hit him, and he fell to the ground, shrieking in pain"

    LOL i cracked up over that ionno why x]

    and sdvhnjskdfvhb MADDY!!! i hope she will be okay D:
    HAHA! I love L4D !! xD I now have a new thought about what Matt looks like when he fights xD Update more please!
    September 1st, 2009 at 01:00am
  • Second Heartbeatxx

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    this was my favorite chapter ever :O
    LOL and if anybody has played the video game Left 4 Dead, i totally pictured Matt as the Tank

    "Just as he was about to reach us a flaming piece of cement hit him, and he fell to the ground, shrieking in pain"

    LOL i cracked up over that ionno why x]

    and sdvhnjskdfvhb MADDY!!! i hope she will be okay D:
    August 31st, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    she has to wake up!
    please let her be a vampire
    update soon please
    <3 Michele
    August 31st, 2009 at 02:29pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    Oh no! maddy
    she better be okay
    please update soon
    <3 michele
    August 31st, 2009 at 01:16am
  • Second Heartbeatxx

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    i am so sorry i dont think i commented your last chapter!

    well anyway, MADDY NOES D:> update soon seriously :[

    i can help you out if you like, i actually have a couple of senarios in my head xD
    August 30th, 2009 at 07:52pm
  • emilypaget

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    Love it! Eeeep! Update soon!
    August 30th, 2009 at 01:41pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    O.o wonder what's going to happen
    loved the update
    August 30th, 2009 at 04:42am
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