Green Eyes - Comments

that was a very sweet way to end the story, i'm just sad that johnny is still all alone...sigh he'll find his mate someday

:D I...loved...this...story!!!!!! <3 You did a wonderful, wonderful job! Like, I can't even describe it with words XD

awww!! that's a really cute ending. Will there be a sequel so we can see Johnny happy??

I loved this story so freaking much that i'm going to miss it so incredibly much
I can't wait to see where you take your other stories
<3 Michele

Okay, so let me take a stab at this again.

Aw... Is over.
Oh well. You still have 5 more...

I don't get why you're always complaining about Kayla. She's so grateful... (Well, in this chapter, anyways. I forgot about the other thirty something chapters...)

Uhh, Iggy has run out of things to say...

Hmm, nice descriptions... Although you should be used to that compliment.
Especially when it's coming from your good ole kiss-ass pal Iggy Piggy :)

Umm... You need to stop having such good ideas. Seriously, either sahre them or your secret with Iggy, or just cut it out. She cannot keep up with all your complex plots.

Ha, like you need the links in the Author's Note. I'm already reading all your stories! *listens carefully* What? Other people? What do you need them for? You already have Iggy! *stops rambling and listens again* Ohh, yeah. Stars are nice. Iggy understands.

...Well, I'm out of topics.
Go write something for another story, bich!

BYE!

Wow...I'm a new reader and this story has made the most boring couple of days writing Shakespeare notes very bearable. I can't believe you're ending it so soon!! There had best be a sequel, 'cos I have spent DAYS chasing the end of this story to see how it turns up and you can't end it there!! Not unless in the last chapter everything happens...but then it's rushed and that would be sad!
I'm so amazed Johnny's gonna be ok - doesn't he get a loved one? He's so wonderful he really should!! And where the hell is Deagen going? He should get his ass back to the battlefield and go home with the boys!! And why haven't they made Kayla a vampire? Then she won't need protecting...as much. Hopefully. And she won't smell so enticing to Zacky. Win win!!
Anyway; please have a sequel to this? I'll pay you?

YAY! YAY FOR NOT KILLING JOHNNY!!!! XD Aw, I can't believe it's almost over!!! So......I'm just gonna have to start reading it from the begining again :D hahahaha!

Fuck! I read the comment above me, and basically ruined the whole chapter! (But I'm gunna go ahead and read it anyways... I can imagine your wording is a little better...)

So she loved Johnny more than she loved anyone before? Hmm, why does that not quite sit right with me?
Ugh, why did you have to be mean to Johnny throughout this story, and then pull a 180 and be mean to Zacky. God, Ashleigh, you're such a bitch. (But I guess I've already told you that, huh? Oh fucking well. Not taking it back this time. (Unless you make some other happy shit happen in the chapter...))

Who the hell is this Degan guy? Shauna - err, Iggy - does not remember him... Refresh my memory, Ashleigh - err, Grampaa. Refresh it.

Ohh, okay. Well, I don't remember him too well, but whatever. That little description in there was enough.

WOOOOO!!! ZACKY KILLED LAYTON!!! HIGHLIGHT OF THE STORY!!!

What's up with your characters and feeling like they're flying? Either I'm going crazy, or you've used that a lot recently... (No comments on the me going crazy thing, okay?)

Ohh, so now she loves Zacky again? What, wanna be mean to Johnny some more? Bitch, make up your mind!

Oh, bitch, we should kill you just for almost making Johnny die. You should know that. God.

But in all seriousness, I agree. It'll be weird not commenting on this fucker all the time. But honestly, I think it'll be weirder when YCHM is done. That was both the first thing I read and the first thing I commented on, so...

Yeah.
Bye!

oh thank you thank you thank you!!!! johnny is alive and well...man you had me for a moment...well anyway great update! i'm so damn happy that all worked out!

YAY JOHNNY'S ALIVE.

Loved the update and can't wait for the final one although I'll be said to see the story end

GREAT UPDATE!!!!!
I am so happy that no one got hurt, well apart from Johnny
can't wait for the next chapter even if it is the last
<3 Michele

Loved the last chapter, I cant wait for the rest!

Just read the whole story and I love the plot.

But how the hell could you kill Johnny :'( at least Zacky is still alive

WTF?! you killed johnny?! what is wrong with you?! grrrr how dare you!

Ah! No!!! Johnny!!!! TT_TT (but great update anyway XD)

Hehehe. '...my body becoming rigid with fear.'
Hahahahahaha.

(I love Messenger so much right now :)

Hahaha. Plus, they had Matt, and well, Matt was a beast.

(I love you so much right now too :)
... You're going to change that, huh? Yeah, I knew you would.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, I love Brian so much right now too. So negative, hahaha.

...
(That is all I have to say about you killing Johnny. Wait! Let me try that again.)
... Bitch.

There we go. That's much better :)

Anyways, good update (I suppose it would've been better if you hadn't been so mean, but whatever.)
And post the rest of this faster! Iggy wants to read it now.

Johnny!!!! he can't die ='[
But i can't wait for the next update
<3 Michele

ASHLEIGH! ASSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGHHH!!! YOU'RE SUCH A MEAN GRAMPAA!! WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU? SO FUCKING MEAN!

*ahem* Anyways, that was actually really good.
(And I read the part where she said that they'd die right when Matt sang 'We're only here to die' and I'm just like O.o 'WTF, Matt? you are not helping! ... But whatever, you're still amazing :)' Ha, you know me, so shut up. I think... I think I should end this bracket thingy now. This is enough of a sidenote.)

And shut up, you're a good writer! This is a good chapter!
And I'm sort fo starting to like your shorter chapters... I don't know why, even... It's just... different.

Well, anyways, I wanna go read HTBH, so I'll leave this random and slightly retarded comment at 'Good job, and shut your old wrinkly mouth, gramps. You know I'm right.'
:D

*waves enthusiastically*

I love your story! You are a very talented writer! I can't wait for the rest!!!

Yay, update! :D I really do love this story hahahaha