Give in to Me - Comments

Michael was born August 29, 1958. The story is set in 1985, starting in January which makes him 26. Why would I need to change the year and his age?

in august 1985 when Michael Jackson was born so you're gonna have to change the year to 1983 to make him 25

woah man that was shocking all the things michael did to her. i want to cry for her. poor girl i feel her pain. i enjoy ur story and the pictures and the banner are absoultely beautiful jenni. even the story is beautiful :)

woah man that was shocking all the things michael did to her. i want to cry for her. poor girl i feel her. i enjoy ur story and the pictures and the banner are absoultely beautiful jenni. even the story is beautiful :)

i have an question do u have an mjfiction? cause this story is on there too and its under username Beautifulmonster. i wanna make sure cause if u ain't that username then ur story has been stolen by that person. just letting u know that

i have an question do u have an mjfiction? cause this story is on there too and its under username Beautifulmonster. i wanna make sure cause u ain't that username then ur story has been stolen by that person. just letting u know that

I just finished your story. It was really good! And now I'm reading What More Can I Give? =]

Wow.... After reading chapter 14, I think -I- need a cold shower! xD ♥

Thank you all for reading my story!!!!!!! :D
You guys have been a great help, inspiring me to write more and more!!!!!!!
I love you guys sooooo much...Stay tuned for the sequel!!!!!!

~Jenni....♥

Aw the ending was so beautiful and sad at the same time...I can't believe this part is over, at least there's a sequel coming :cute: can't wait for that! I'm going to try to be the first commenter again :mrgreen: it may not happen coz your story is so popular now :cute: I got a shout out! Yay I feel loved! Thank you!

So sad... Great detailed chapter<3 It was spectacular!

OH MY GOD!!
How could it possibly end like that?!
I mean I loved it because every good story needs that kind of tear jerking emotion and affection, even heartbreak, but still!
Now you've got me all wound up and uptight waiting for this sequel.
Now I must thank Speedy Gonzales for whatever reasons it is that she made this story possible.
So thank you, Speedy, if you see this, and thank you for posting my letter to Michael, again. =))
You both made this story terrific, amazing, outstanding even and I'll be waitingpatiently impatiently for the sequel.
=DD
Can't wait!!

R.I.P. "Give Into Me," you were an amazing story which many readers loved and will always remember. Can't wait for the sequel!

(Don't be freaked, it's traditional for me at the end of an amazing story =))

Jenni I LOVED this story and will EAGERLY await the upcoming sequel. I'd love to co-write but I dont deal with co-writing stories that well. Actually I can, but since this is a story about Michael, I'd rather not disgrace his name. >xD haha. =)

Oh the horror why did he have to do that. That even hurt me. Please start the next installment

oh dear i really need to let you know that you are the best author ever! thois was sad and heartbreaking... and only you could have ended it here :) i really am dying to read the sequel. And a terrible coincidence was that i was listening to "Don't you cry tonight" by Gun 'n roses while reading this so... it really broke my heart xDDDD you are amazing jenni.

No, dude, you have to like update like right now, dude. Oh my word, I think I'm freakin out. It was so good, but I gotta find out what happens! Ahhhh!

It better be a good explaination

Ooh there's tension! I want to know what happens next! Also, the drummer of the Sex Pistols is called Paul Cook, I just remembered :cute: has nothing to do with your story but you wanted to know

Ooooooohhh, Michael better have a real good excuse now!!
I absolutely love your banner!!
It's amazing!
I just can't imagine him doing something like that though!
Maybe everyone's misinterpreting the relationship between the two...?
Anyway, write more soon lad!
You got me psyched!

O_O Oh boyy Michael's gon' go ddooooowwn. >xD I love this story. =) I'll put a link on my profile now.