Loved it! I feel sort of sorry for her. The thoughts can be killing after a friend tried to kiss you. I loved the descriptions and then how they met. It seems like Kyle might be against this friendship. Great update :)
But I did like the chapter : < and wow... it must have been awkward to sit in that car after a moment like that :) A sightseeing trip to LA would be so cool ^^ I loved the update veeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeery much :) Keep it up!
It was not a boring chapter! I wonder how he got that nickname from the paparazzi too. And I think that if you keep it a original/fan fiction it's gonna be okay.
first of all.. before I forget. : D “Are you okay?” Shia asked, slightly confused by her staring. It was like it at that moment did Maddie realized who he really way. - a small mistake : D
I would love to see her freak out : D haha. Winnie The Pooh! Love that :D:D:D I wonder if the next time Maddie and Shia meet she will cause another accident haha : D the thought of sitting by the desk and studying like Joanne makes me wish that never happened o.o the name of the studies sounds hard o.o I wonder if everything works out for the Maddie.. o.o she's brave!
haha :D she's so clumsy : p hahaha can't stop laughing at the situation. It was really entertaining and I'm subscribing and you HAVE to continue this ^^ It's really great :D Can't wait to read more :D