adorable
October 23rd, 2009 at 11:47am
Is this a computer glitch, or do you really only have 3 comments? That's unacceptable! In my opinon, this story deserves way more than that! I love this so far. Except for a couple a typos, it was excellent. I love the plot, very original. I liked some of the little things you put in there too: like the French parts. You just made me realize that I need to practice more. And Ordinary Day, I love that song so much. And that they went to see Harry Potter. Loved that! Especially when she grabbed Nick's hand when something startled her. I could totally picture that. I'm not sure if you were thinking of the same part that I am, but towards the middle of the movie a hand pops up and my whole theatre jumped. I wish I could have video taped it. I love that characters too. They're really believable. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
-Shawnee
