: This was another good one, the most mistakes that caught my attention was the difference between ‘Then’ & ‘Than’ and of course ‘There’ & Their’. But anyways, I really liked it, the whole time I was reading I had this narrator voice in my head. It just seemed to fit, it was amazing. The summary gets a plus.
But seriously?
Is that really the ending? You’re right, that ending does make the readers angry, but yet, it pretty much fits for an ending. “But does she get in?” Because Zacky asked that, but didn’t really say that she got in….
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But seriously?
Is that really the ending? You’re right, that ending does make the readers angry, but yet, it pretty much fits for an ending. “But does she get in?” Because Zacky asked that, but didn’t really say that she got in….
I really enjoyed reading it though.