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  • poison and blood

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    SEQUEL. NOW. PLEASE.
    </3
    November 16th, 2012 at 10:15pm
  • Lunacy.Fringe.

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    Are you going to repost the sequel??
    March 26th, 2012 at 08:23am
  • defenestration;;

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    aww, what happened to a sequel? :(
    i really loved this story, by the way.
    Great job!
    December 20th, 2011 at 09:11pm
  • inmemoryof_fireflies

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    I'm agreeing with whatshername924....I need to see a sequel...it drove me crazy I couldn't find it yet....please please please....one more time please?

    and by the way I love how you're actually making the story mix in with what happened in real life with Green Day in the early days :)
    September 18th, 2010 at 01:53pm
  • whatsername924

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    ok so I just found and read this story...I neeeeed a sequel lol
    you are such a great writer, and this plot has such potential! :P
    July 30th, 2010 at 08:57am
  • trechic

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    OMG Sequel right now. *Waits impatiently* :file:
    August 16th, 2009 at 12:51pm
  • hessicusz

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    awww, yay for sequels!
    August 16th, 2009 at 05:32am
  • baby eyes.

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    Thank you everybody! I seriously think updates were so fast on this story because of all the feedback I got! I just wanted to keep writing for all of you (and they were short, so it was bound to be quicker) but thanks again! (:
    August 16th, 2009 at 04:26am
  • Sassafras Roots.

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    Fantastic ending to the story! Bravo!
    I eagerly await the sequel!!!!! =)
    August 16th, 2009 at 04:22am
  • Dirnty thinker

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    Awesome monologue. I can't wait for the sequel! (but no pressure)
    August 16th, 2009 at 01:44am
  • trechic

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    I definitely see what happens next but if you finish this story now its going to be a vague ending. I can see you are trying to go with the surprise element but for all we know she can fly off to finland for a better life... I think you can borrow fown the options then leave us in awe waiting for a sequel.
    August 12th, 2009 at 02:50pm
  • hessicusz

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    new story! new story! new story! hahaha.
    August 12th, 2009 at 02:33am
  • Dirnty thinker

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    I think it'd be EPIC if you ended it on this note. It'd be an abrupt, dramatic ending :) But the question is...how would you start the sequel? I await your decision.
    August 12th, 2009 at 01:11am
  • Sassafras Roots.

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    yay another awesome chapter. I like the idea of a sequel, but it's up to you lol. No matter what you do it will be awesome =)
    August 11th, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • baby eyes.

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    I wrote it that way so maybe it helped show where the band are in this point of time. They haven't made Dookie yet and Pulling Teeth is written about this incident, so it seemed necessary (:
    August 11th, 2009 at 11:16am
  • hessicusz

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    aw, poor mike D:
    August 11th, 2009 at 04:08am
  • Dirnty thinker

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    Ah, I see you wrote Mike's clumsiness into this :roll:
    Kat is bad. Bad, bad, bad. Instant karma's gonna get her.
    August 11th, 2009 at 12:58am
  • Sassafras Roots.

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    Oh no Mike!!!!! But at least he's going to get better. As always, fantastic chapter! More soon =)
    August 10th, 2009 at 06:08pm
  • Sassafras Roots.

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    YESSS! they're kinda sorta together now, but not really lol. Oh well it's a step closer! I can't wait to see what's going to happen with the whole Tre situation and how they are going to be when they are officially dating and not just sex buddies lol. =)
    August 10th, 2009 at 03:05am
  • Dirnty thinker

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    So now they're friends with benefits, hm? I don't know how I feel about this :lol: And if Tre finds out, Billie's getting his balls cut off :XD
    August 9th, 2009 at 10:37pm