Loved the chapter! I agree with the person above me! I've been waiting forever for an update but as writers, I also know that we have other things to attend to. I can't wait until the next chapter comes! :)
This story is completely wonderful... Honestly,I've been waiting for an update FOREVER now, & I got an email saying you wrote the chapter so I gasped much louder than I'd intended too xD I really like the insight you're giving the reader about Tom's feelings, & how stubborn he is to realise he likes Marie!! :D It was really sweet & romantic, this whole story is! Dark romance... It's just nothing like I've ever read(: I wonder what's going to happen between them by the end of the night?(; Update SOOOOON, please!!! :D
You have absolutely no idea how much I love this story! I was tearing up there, at the end of the last chapter, when Tom ran out on her D: More updates are needed! Lol. You're such a talented writer. Can't wait until the next chapter is posted! Hopefully that will be soon (:
Well, I just finished reading the whole story, and boy was it good. My dad and I got in an argument yesterday because I refused to get up from the computer in order to read all of it. Ha ha. Anyhow, I like how Jeremy's last name is Stoker, like Bram Stoker 'cus he wrote Dracula and Nicolette is a vampire . . . ha ha, I thought that was pretty clever(; I'm really loving the way you portray Tom and Marie's relationship, because it's not all sweet and gentle like NORMAL people, but it's not insanely abnormal just because he'd be Voldemort, know what I mean? Also, I nearly died when I finally found out Marie's secret!! Aha ha :D Aaaaand, that last kiss was soooo freakin' cute, and how Tom just ran away afterwards . . . gosh. You're an amazing writer, just saying(: Can't WAIT to read more!
"What are you- a submarine?" Oh gosh did that one make me LAUGH! :D Ha ha(: I'm on chapter four right now but I really like it, and I'm VERY curious to see what Marie's secret is, so I'm subscribing. You do have a way with words, I like it(x
So that was short, and I am angered. But I really like that he kissed her--it was definitely a little cutie patootie moment. I just wish he wouldn't have walked away. Now I'm going to slap him in the nutsack and run away and steal Hagrid from Marie and then those two can get funky. :)
OMG HAGRIDYAYYY. I LOVE THAT BOY. I'm so glad Marie asked him the dance! They'll be so cute, and dude, if I were in that school at that time I would totally want to be best friends with Hagrid. He's seriously my favorite. Oh and, can I please have Tom? Before he lost his nose?
I'm a new reader and I got too the end if this and I was like NOOOOOIO¡-so good! Update soon :) and I'm typing on my phone so excuse the spelling errors
The update was lovely, I adore the exchanges between Marie and Tom. It is so believable and makes me giggle with glee throughout this chapter! Hagrid was really sweet and I felt like I could imagine this story perfectly. This is by far my favourite fan fiction on mibba! :)
I truly believe this story is the only story I am perfectly a-okay with suspended time in between each update. I go silly when I see that you've updated, and know I won't be disappointed with the new chapter. The suspense kills me, of course, but I can live with the minor thrill of just what's to come. You're an amazing author, and I really hope you succeed with your writing endeavors.
Ah! An update! I LOVE this story. It's so clever and the ideas you used for this are amazing. You've pieced it all together so nicely. And Gaspard Ulliel= Yum. I loved the update by the way. Makes total sense for Riddle to be so haughty and rude towards Hagrid, with his hate for anything not purely magical. Great update! I am eagerly awaiting the next. =) Oh and this was definitely my favorite part: "He’s not the sharpest tooth in the Tentacula plant." Nice play of words.