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  • Tyson Ritter

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    Ah, you updated ahgain.
    I love this story, it's intense. Honestly. I can't wait for the future development.
    May 18th, 2010 at 03:21pm
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    To be completely honest, I couldn't believe when I saw you updated.
    I love your descriptions, especially the ones about Brendon's fears. And I like how the relationship is developing slowly between the two.
    I only hope you'll update more frequently.
    May 11th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • LoveTheLifeYouLive

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    *drama =P
    November 3rd, 2009 at 09:27pm
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    She said yes! And so the drame begins. xD
    November 3rd, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • Parle

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    :)
    So.. exciting.
    Amazing! More, please! <3
    November 3rd, 2009 at 12:25am
  • Tyson Ritter

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    WOW Smiley
    That was intense. And so amazing.
    I liked every bit of it.
    Keep up
    xoxo
    November 2nd, 2009 at 12:24pm
  • Parle

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    <3 :D :D I love the fact that he's so blunt about asking her. Haha.
    More, please!! :]
    November 2nd, 2009 at 03:59am
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    'Brendon walked into uni like a man on a mission. Lara was sitting in her usual spot on the grass with Jenna and Spencer. With nothing but adrenalin running through him, Brendon walked straight up to Lara, “Hey, will you go out with me?”' - I loved this bit, I hope she says yes. xD
    October 29th, 2009 at 04:50pm
  • Tyson Ritter

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    Squeak
    It's so amazing dear. It kept me at the edge on my seat the whole time.
    October 25th, 2009 at 06:00pm
  • Parle

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    :D <3
    So cute, man. So cute.
    I love Brendon, haha.
    October 19th, 2009 at 04:18am
  • Tyson Ritter

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    He kissed her?
    Oh my..
    Can't wait for the next chapter to see what will happen.
    Keep up dear
    October 18th, 2009 at 02:52pm
  • Parle

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    This is so amazing. :]
    The coloring of the font and background make my eyes hurt, but whatever. It's worth it! Hahaha.

    :D Keep it up! <33
    I love this.
    October 15th, 2009 at 08:38pm
  • Tyson Ritter

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    It was a great update.
    Poor Brendon, can't get the shooting out of his mind.
    And I love the way he's been acting around Lara. He likes her.
    And Spence, all overprotective.
    And how come no one else is commenting on this?
    October 8th, 2009 at 12:54pm
  • Jack Skellington

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    YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :XD

    Brendon's such a sweetie... In Love (how many times have i said that?)

    Wonderful update. (:
    September 13th, 2009 at 07:45am
  • Tyson Ritter

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    Awww... Even at his worse, Brendon is thinking about Lara.
    I like it.
    September 9th, 2009 at 05:48pm
  • Tyson Ritter

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    Don't go on the hiatus.
    This is a great story, and it would be such a shame to do that.
    xoxo
    August 27th, 2009 at 03:29pm
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    This is great, I hope you don't go on haitus but if you do, don't be gone for long. xD
    August 24th, 2009 at 11:45am
  • Jack Skellington

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    Brendon is such a sweetheart... In Love I think he is.

    Well, if you do go on hiatus, I hope you find your inspiration soon. Or... I can throw inspiration at you!! **starts to throw inspiration at you**

    :tehe:

    This was a wonderful update. Just wonderful. This story makes me love Brendon even more than I already do. I love this story. In Love

    :D
    August 24th, 2009 at 02:01am
  • jeezkay

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    i love this story!
    August 21st, 2009 at 04:30am
  • Tyson Ritter

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    Wow, that was intense.
    I liked it
    August 13th, 2009 at 07:13pm
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