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  • rahyan

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    You didn't capitalize Bible.

    Scene changes are supposed to be signified with *** not ****************************.
    August 21st, 2009 at 04:44am
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    From the very beginning, I liked it. The description pulled me in right away and I immediatly wanted to read more.

    Silence lay like a blanket over the two men, awkwardly set. I love the way you described that. It fit perfectly together.
    July 24th, 2009 at 05:06am
  • Kupo

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    This is crazy, cause I normally don't like stories about the Way brothers, but this is suuuper cute. :D
    It goes along with the song too!
    Dance Great job!
    July 22nd, 2009 at 03:18am
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