October 17th, 2014 at 05:12am
I Found Him on Craigslist.com - Comments
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So when is the rest of this story coming? I really want to read more.September 24th, 2014 at 08:41pm
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oh wow this is good. I am still glued to it. What an interesting story. It is very refreshing compared to all the stores out there that are so a like. Your writing is very good too. The lay out is a little dark but your paragraphs are spaced nicely and easy to read. I like your characters and am having fun reading along to it.September 24th, 2014 at 07:23pm
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@ intoxi-kittens
Yes, yes, yes! I promise I will very soon! Life has taken its toll on me and I've been MIA on Mibba for a good while now but I'll start working on the next chapter! Thanks for keeping up with my storyyyyy! TT___TTJune 11th, 2013 at 12:38am -
update soooon?June 8th, 2013 at 02:15am
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comment swap.
very different. i like.May 26th, 2013 at 07:18pm -
Comment swap brought me here, and I must say this story is very different. Reading the comment below also, if they had a contract, it'd basically be 50 Shades of Grey XD not that I read it >.> but I really didn't XD but yes, I enjoy this story, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens between them by the end.December 9th, 2012 at 06:15pm
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comment swap!
Well, I think it's an interesting plot. I appreciate how Angelique's character is fiercely independent and strong but I'm wondering if she wants a challenge, why does she get upset at Luke for doing what he's paid to do? I'm on chapter 6 and I just don't understand the dynamics of their relationship. I think if they had drawn up a clear and concise contract so everyone knows the boundaries and things. I'll continue to read because I'm interested to find out how things go between them.December 5th, 2012 at 11:38pm -
Comment Swap.
I am not usually into these kinds of stories but this one has caught my interest. I'm usually reading Fan fictions. If it wasn't for the comment swap, I would have never found your story. Your writing style is very provocative and I love it. The main character is a very intriguing woman and I'm very happy I was introduced to this story. Keep writing while I subscribe to my first story that isn't a fanfiction. :) Great job! You are an excellent author. :) I'll also be recommending your story as well. Recommending stories is something I rarely do on here. That is a very high compliment. :)October 18th, 2012 at 05:20am -
Comment swap.
So I don't always feel the need to comment about the layoutsof stories, but even though the dark colours messed with my bad eyes a little I like the simpleness of it. I found this very interesting just from the summary and the very first line in the chapter. You've succeeded to intrigue me and lead me into the story. Thanks fcuk for comment swap I keep finding great stories to read. =) Good job, ill read more soon!October 17th, 2012 at 08:19am -
Comment swap~
Wow I love this story! Iv read from the begining to the end in under an hour! I plan to subscribe and continue to find out what will unfold around Angelique, but a small part of me also hopes that everything will crash and burn for her, shes too confident of herself but I guess only time will tell, Im also looking forward to seeing what becomes of Luke, this is a very intriguing storyline and the sex just makes it better :D cant wait to read moreSeptember 6th, 2012 at 03:22pm -
Comment Swap: Whoooooaaa I wasn't expecting such a sexually explicit story from Mibba, but I am very grateful for it! Finally something with a little more pulp and devilish, and can I tell you how much I appreciate Angelique's appetite? I'd rather her, be a single fierce female forever rather than settle for anyone like Adonis, or really any man in general. Great read!August 30th, 2012 at 05:40am
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I have to commend you for your original storyline, and having a fierceless sexual female main character. Plus, it's an original storyline. It's a nice change of pace from all the boy meets girl, true lurve ensues.
Your descriptions of uhm physical intimacies? I guess is also really done well. It's sensual and straight forward without being crude or bland. Actually, all your description is great, but I follow bad fanficsex on Tumblr so well done sex and such really stands out to me.August 29th, 2012 at 07:03am -
update please? :/June 12th, 2011 at 09:06pm
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you finally updated!!!! i am soooo hookedJanuary 16th, 2011 at 10:01pm
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LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVELOVEIT!January 12th, 2011 at 05:04am
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This is a great story. :) Keep going! <3July 21st, 2010 at 08:07pm
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i absolutely love this story!!!! You totally need to keep updating!July 15th, 2010 at 10:22pm
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You haven't updated in sooooo long, but I'm really glad you did...I'm still subscribed to this story because I really love where you're going with it..so please update again soon[er] this time though! :) xxxJuly 15th, 2010 at 05:33am
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I'm sorry I haven't commented in so long. Been very busy.
I have to say that Angelique kinda scares me. Not as in she'll kill me, but her look on life.
I really think she needs a good, expensive therapist.
Adonis sounds like a great guy. I'd marry him instantly. On the pool table, even.
You're really a great writer.
More pleaseMay 8th, 2010 at 09:31pm
Hello! First and foremost, I really would like to thank you for your support on this little story of mine. To tell you the truth, I've had a draft for the next chapter for a while now, I just never proofread it. I'm very sorry for having kept you waiting!