I Found Him on Craigslist.com - Comments

I love you story. It has me really wanting to see where things go. Please update soon.

Love the story, please update soon. Please?

Wow.. I read the faster chapter, and I must say, I like it!

I like how Luke's pissing her off, genius!

This story is a really interesting concept; warped, twisted, and highly entertaining. Before I finish commenting though, I have to get this out of the way.

Could you please properly capitalize your title? It's a huge pet peeve of mine. Your story is pretty damn good, but that's sort of distracting. I was passing your story on to a friend, and she was pretty upset about it as well. We may jsut be acting anal, but it doesn't send the right message at all. Your writing is actually rather skilled, with complex sentence structures and good descriptions, but the title sends off the wrong message. It seems like your story would be full of grammar and spelling errors; it's not. So fixing the title would be beneficial to you.

Anyway, as I was saying, this story is very interesting. I think the idea is something different; i mean, who turns down sex? Seriously? Haha, so maybe I'm a little bit of a pervert, but I think we're all that way...sometimes...Okay, back to the point. I love the way you've described Angelique. You've created such a strong character. The choice for an omniscent narrative was a great one, because you get to reveal all these little nuances that probably wouldn't appear in the first person perspective. Angelique's personality traits are being revealed very quickly, while Luke's cool attitude is such a contrast. I'm loving how you're pitting the two of them against each other. It's great.

I can't wait to see how their confrontations are going to go now. I'm just counting down the minutes until someone starts to slip up. It'sj ust a matter of who, and what the repercussions will be.

such a good story its really great so please update soon =] x

really really like this. more people should read and comment it. it's a great story.

Dude.
This is the best story ever.

I love your chapters as always but I missed the notification on this one :( :(
Anyways, more soon please cause I like the ending when it was all hot and smokey and when the scene got all huffy, he casually asks her "So is the coffee done yet?" Luke: New. Favorite. Character :)

You're not allowed to KEEP ME HANGING!!
UPDATE!?

I like this one :) :) I like how she's testing him and how he's not seemingly one to cave. Good job, more please!

i can totally relate to this Ray-ch. because there isn't ANYTHING i wouldn't do for the right price as well. i love your fucking stories!!! i connect with them :)

wow this story is well written and its very interesting,i think your perfect to write vampire stories about love or lust whichever genre you write so well,your every word keeps me grasped and wanting more,lol you have amazing talent,i hope you keep writing as always^^

your stories are all slightly adult. i just read the title then the story . not the rating. very stupid of me i know. But still good story. lots of ways it can go. UPDATE!!

This is a pretty good story.
I liked how she just jumped off him in the middle of them having sex to check her email, LOL ;]
UPDATEEEEEE?