Wow, I loved this. I wasn't expecting the ending, I always love a story with a twist :mrgreen: The descriptions were good, and I liked how you used the repition of her headache to show confusion & such. I'd probably read the prequal if I had time, and I plan to later. You should definetly write more stuff like this, I really enjoyed it
The descriptions were good, and I liked how you used the repition of her headache to show confusion & such. I'd probably read the prequal if I had time, and I plan to later.
You should definetly write more stuff like this, I really enjoyed it