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  • x-LyricalOneLiner-x

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    So I just came across this story.
    And now I'm like "Whoa, this looks interesting"
    I'm really looking forward to seeing where you take this.
    Amelia sounds like some character.
    Update!
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • blondenlovinit

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    very good.
    love it already
    can't wait to see what you have in store for this story!
    August 10th, 2009 at 10:07am
  • plug-in-baby

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    LOVE the update
    i cant wait to see how this all unfolds :]]
    and jack seems like sucha cutie pie <3

    and heres a pretty good layout site
    http://fridaylove.radio-rocket.net/art-lay.php
    August 9th, 2009 at 04:51am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Nothing much happened. Obviously, it's the second chapter. *rolls eyes* I'd like to brush past it all and get to a juicy part. I'm thinking chapter 5 has what I need?
    Anyhoo, still enjoyed the chapter. Maybe cuz I was Mibba-less the whole month. [Yeah, yeah it's only the 9th..]

    Next chapter please.

    PS: Only 3 more comments. COME ON PEOPLE! I CAN'T SPAM ANYMORE! :XD
    August 9th, 2009 at 12:46am
  • kimbermaynee

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    hopefully there will be 20 comments soon, because i definately want an update (:
    August 7th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • nerdy love.

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    Interesting chapter, I can't wait to see what Amelia is really like.
    Update soon?
    August 7th, 2009 at 03:28am
  • catastrophe.

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    I like this :)
    August 7th, 2009 at 03:15am
  • legit.

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    hopefully john ohhh will pop up soon?
    :D
    nice update.
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:24am
  • livingproof;;

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    I like this.
    alot.
    I love how intense it is.
    update soon, please? (:
    August 7th, 2009 at 12:45am
  • little bear

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    this is wicked! i subscribed.
    August 7th, 2009 at 12:41am
  • xoxo1234

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    sounds interesting!
    August 6th, 2009 at 07:17am
  • fitchy16

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    luv luv luv the story :] Dance Ha Ha
    August 5th, 2009 at 05:08am
  • plug-in-baby

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    so i loved your other story so i of course saw this one and read it
    and i loveeee it!
    i cant wait to see what happens!
    August 3rd, 2009 at 02:07am
  • Lady.Orion

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    WOW! I regret not reading it yesterday/ in the early morning.

    Nothing much happening but it was still exciting. The end mostly. :mrgreen:
    No cheating the system...dammit.

    Only 3 more comments. No biggie. :XD
    July 31st, 2009 at 03:32pm
  • UnderScore_

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    ahh flyzik and john...
    this story already has two of my fav ppl in the world in it
    def reading and subscribing
    July 31st, 2009 at 05:18am
  • nerdy love.

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    Amazing story, I love how it's written for some odd reason.
    And your banners are cool!
    Please update soon.
    July 31st, 2009 at 02:30am
  • Lady.Orion

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    Have to say, the banner totally caught my eye. :)
    And I've seen the girl before, but she had a "Shut Up!" on her mouth. :XD
    Ohh back when I was crazy about Simple Plan. [Who am I kidding? Still am. :yah]

    I could write a synopsis for yeh if yeh'd like. But it would probably suck. I'll work on what you have since I can't exactly sum up something I don't know. :lmfao

    Anyhoo, yet to read the chapter. Thank mother dearest. Though at the mo, she isn't very dear.... :grr:
    July 31st, 2009 at 02:19am
  • Zack Merrick.

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    I LUBE THIS!
    Need Johnohh soon? :D
    Gaahh more!
    July 31st, 2009 at 01:59am
  • BOOMshakalaka!

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    love this story already, but you can't leave it there!! I wanna know whats wrong with her!!!
    update soon please
    :)
    July 31st, 2009 at 01:59am
  • ThunderRoad.

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    I absolutely love your first banner there. It's amazing. :mrgreen:
    July 31st, 2009 at 01:58am