Broken Dolls Asylum - Comments

I really love this Za!
The way you write this is spectacular, and I'll be sure to subscribe so I can go back and read the rest of the story later.
I love it that much.
The characters are amazing, and the descriptions and dialogue... It's like I'm actually there with Freddie, with the way you wrote it.

Okay. Favorite parts time!
Chapter One:
“I can’t call you out if I don’t know your name. My name is Freddie.” I answered, twisting my hips towards him.

“My name is Tom.” He smiled kindly. “And you are the first person to ever acknowledge that.”

“It’s ‘because I’m not crazy.” I twirled one of my dark strands of hair, turning away.

“I believe you.” He closed the door before he could hear my answer.

“You’re the first.”

I loved this little interaction between them. The way Freddie says "Your the first." in my head is so believable, with how the staff is described.

No one ever knew who the person who woke us up at six in the morning was. I bet that if we did know, they would be already dead.

That part made me grin and laugh evilly then laugh again cause that would so be true if someone were to wake me up at six every single morning.

Chapter Two
"Oh come on, you know that you’re my chocolate afro bear in the whole wide world times ten."

Chocolate Afro bear. I luh you.

This was really well written, and I shall go and subscribe now. <3

You're officially in my favorite writers list.
And I'm only on the first chapter.
That's how super-duper awesome you are.
And the fact that I love crazy shit :D

I really love your story. It is wonderfully enjoyable. :] I hope to see more one day!

YAYYYY!
Izzy's back!<3
This was a great update, and was much anticipated.
I miss you,btww D;

absolutly breath taking story ^.^
cant wait for more :D
great job(:

This is so good! PLEASE update soon!!

FORGET MY LAST COMMENT!!!!
im just stupid.

so, is freddie a boy?
im confussed :S
but i love the story.

This is so good!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!

Oh. I loved the kiss. Loved it. :D

Ozzie is the Joker to Freddie's Batman.

The cookies to her milk... the bacon to her eggs... the butter to her toast.... I could go on all day!

I lovett!

YAAAAYY!
;D
I was mad, since it didn't tell me that BDA was updated, but this totallly made up for it(:
That was so cute *-*
I wish that could happen to me, so romantic.

Excellente Iz
:}

I'm going to have to say that this is my all time favorite story on mibba.
I am serious.
It's amazing.
Keep up the good work!
:]

Ozzie and her need to kiss. Now. (:

Woo!
Yay for 3 stars*-*

I love the bet at the end, haha.
That's such a great idea.
I think Ozzie will crack first xD

More! :}

Whoooo. I am back and I read it all. Are you ready for my monster of a comment? (: I really really love how well you describe everyone. Their outfits and stuff, like Mona and Valentine, and Ozzie. I also loved the description of Slaughter. And, the fac that you call her Slaughter (:

It's also adorable how Mona speaks for Valentine all the time. She's a cutie pie.

Your plot for this story is so original. I love it to pieces. The insane asylum, the killing of Freddie's grandma, the arsenic with Ozzie, just tons and tons of amazing ideas all threaded together. I love it all.

I also found the part where Freddie untied her clothes and told that guy that she had sex with him very amusing. Cause, he believed her (:

It's adorable how Tom covers for Freddie all of the time. I feel bad for him :( I wish he could have gone with them. Anyhwo.

"Oh God. I shouldn't even be telling you this. I swear, each time I talk to you, I fear for my pay check."

He wrapped an arm around my shoulder as I shrugged him off. “I said a second not second base.”

Those two sentences seriously made me laugh. Not that they are the only ones that did, just that they were the funniest (:

I do have one tiny thing that is bothering me though, and please don't hit me for expressing my unwanted opinion.. (:

When you do flashbacks, instead of putting them in single quotes, you shoud make them italic.

I got all confused and what not :/ hahaha

All in freaking all, this story is fucking amazing and I find it extremely refreshing to read. I love it all. And I really wanna know what happens with everyone. If they meet up again, or what not.

So, please up date as soon as you can. I'm waiting for it (:

BDA: The three initials that always brighten my day. lol

TO FOREWARN THEE, IZ!! I'm hoping for a romantic moment between Ozzie and Freddie sometime...

<3
I love the cockroach part, hehee^-^
This is great! They made it out, yay!(:

Oi Doll. This is rather amazing. I'd love to stay up and read the rest of it, but I'm almost postiive my ma would be thrown into HRC if she caught me on the computer again. (:

I subscribed and I'll be sure to come back and read the rest.

OZZZZEEEE

Ez beautamous. <<3333333

Great story.