the mercy series is my absolute FAVORITE of all time! i almost had a heart attack when i sawyou wrote a story about sam. if you know anyone else that has a mercy story could you message me or comment me? please?
I'm interested to see what exactly this plan entails and I wanna know more about what they are. It's new and interesting. I love the way you get into Sam's head!
I really love this story so far, it's refreshing to see Sam's thought because we never get that in the Mercy novels. It's refreshing and interesting. I am loving Celeste already and I think I've guessed what she is. I want to learn more about the relationship between her and Vincent.
The only problem I have spotted is with the tense, you switch from passt tense present tense sometimes. I only noticed that because I do it too.