Cross My Heart And Hope To Lie - Comments

  • choirgirlx3

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    i love it
    please update soon
    December 14th, 2009 at 02:03am
  • LottieNightmare

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    Ooooo I really like that!
    You should definitely update it again soon :)
    September 6th, 2009 at 01:49am
  • Twilight.Kisses

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    I really like it!

    Did you write that song??

    Please read my story! (its my only one lol)
    No I didn't write it , I forgot to say those Lyrics Belong To Jordin Sparks and not me.
    August 25th, 2009 at 07:00am
  • ifiwroteitonmyhand

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    I really like it!

    Did you write that song??

    Please read my story! (its my only one lol)
    August 25th, 2009 at 06:30am
  • JoBromance81208

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    reallllly good! :)
    i love that song!
    August 24th, 2009 at 07:07am
  • light house;;

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    amazing chapter. can't wait to see the next one =]
    August 22nd, 2009 at 03:33pm
  • JoBromance81208

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    sooo good!
    cant wait for the next chpter! :)
    August 19th, 2009 at 02:16am
  • light house;;

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    Can't wait for the next chapter!
    i just love this story =]
    August 17th, 2009 at 11:04pm
  • permanentdeclaration

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    The writing is very good.
    The plot is original.
    My only complaint would be that there were a few spelling erros and you seem to not know when to start or end a sentence. There were a few places where I thought that there should have a been a period, and a few where I thought that there shouldn't have been a period.
    But other than that, this is pretty good.
    :)

    P.S. I think it's the Jonas Brothers :D
    August 12th, 2009 at 10:03pm
  • TimeToFly

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    Hey! I am loving where this is going... :) Good so far! Update soon!!!
    August 12th, 2009 at 01:05am
  • ifiwroteitonmyhand

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    Niceee.

    If you want to read something, take a look at my only story.

    Because I Would Walk A Thousand Miles.
    August 11th, 2009 at 06:49am
  • JoBromance81208

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    This was gooood! i loved it!
    its really original!
    update soooon!
    August 10th, 2009 at 11:15pm
  • not bitter;

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    Really original.
    Like you're not throwing Nicole and Joe together straight away, that can some times spoil things.
    Subscribing (:
    x
    August 10th, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • white knuckles

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    This is really good! I like how it's just kind of taking baby steps instead of throwing everything up at once.
    August 10th, 2009 at 07:15pm
  • PoisonIvy--xx

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    Very Nice story,
    I like the plot line that you have for it. Different from other stories.
    Well done, and update soon.
    August 10th, 2009 at 06:53pm
  • Already Gone;

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    I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Amazing keep it up!
    August 10th, 2009 at 04:45pm
  • here in your arms.

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    I like this. It's moving nice and slow, and not just quick and in your face already. That's very good. I like the character very much, I'm excited to see where she's gonna go.

    And also excited for the Jonas introduction. :]

    Very very good. Update soon.
    August 10th, 2009 at 04:24pm
  • light house;;

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    great chapter and update soon!

    and since you are in need of a banner i made you one =]
    http://i426.photobucket.com/albums/pp346/xBeckyxLovesxJoBros/banner/meganfox.jpg
    August 9th, 2009 at 12:15am
  • Twilight.Kisses

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    And thank you for the comment of being a dear friend and a great writer! ^.^ I totally forgot to add that in the comment when that was the first thing I was planning to write, haha.

    Hm...you have 4 subscribers and yet comments from three people. And I didn't subscribe cuz I dont go on my email, so it's pretty pointless to, but that's beside the point. Haha.
    I also tell you when I update
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:46am
  • vanilla twilight;;

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    And thank you for the comment of being a dear friend and a great writer! ^.^ I totally forgot to add that in the comment when that was the first thing I was planning to write, haha.

    Hm...you have 4 subscribers and yet comments from three people. And I didn't subscribe cuz I dont go on my email, so it's pretty pointless to, but that's beside the point. Haha.
    August 8th, 2009 at 07:41am