Please do not kill your story. This chapter was really cute (good cute, not cheesy, corny, bad cute). I love the little text coversation that was going on. It made me smile. I love the connection they have! They way they act off each other makes me laugh, smile, and sometimes go "awe! That was so adorable!". And please! I'm contrbuting my post! So please keep your story going, and do not let others not posting put you down!
Aww that was a pretty good first date chapter, am I right? =] My lovely you are an amazing writer! Your story is one of the few I actually still read. It is that good! Can't wait for the next chapter ;) 'bout bloody time for those two lol.
Awesome chapters! I love how Michael doesn't know she's a vampire, actually I love Michael period. You make him so witty. Can't wait for more =] Good luck with the exams!
Um inspiring comment.... Hmmm..... Let's see here..... I really like your characters, they are very lovable and have very distinguishable personalities! I love the little witty remarks you stick in there, laughs always help, and just keep going with your story line, cause I like it's uniqueness! There I think that was at least kind of inspiring! If not, well... At least I tried! XD