Happily Ever After - Comments

  • Brianna_Breakdown_

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    Amazing story! I love it. Please update soon.
    June 1st, 2010 at 04:15am
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    Love your story. I have been do a lot of homework for summer class, so I do not always have time to leave comments. More story please!
    May 31st, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • aruchan

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    Please do not kill your story. This chapter was really cute (good cute, not cheesy, corny, bad cute). I love the little text coversation that was going on. It made me smile. I love the connection they have! They way they act off each other makes me laugh, smile, and sometimes go "awe! That was so adorable!". And please! I'm contrbuting my post! So please keep your story going, and do not let others not posting put you down!
    May 31st, 2010 at 07:44am
  • How He Loves

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    haha. Sweet chapter. Michael's so cute and funny at the same time. UPDATE SOON, OKAY???
    May 31st, 2010 at 01:50am
  • OliveRein

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    YES PLEASE :P i love this story!
    May 30th, 2010 at 10:56pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    haha
    no texting during dates!! bad!! :P!!
    that was cute! :D!
    yes!! :D!!
    May 30th, 2010 at 08:41pm
  • Post-It

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    Aww that was a pretty good first date chapter, am I right? =]
    My lovely you are an amazing writer! Your story is one of the few I actually still read. It is that good!
    Can't wait for the next chapter ;) 'bout bloody time for those two lol.
    May 30th, 2010 at 08:18pm
  • temper1313

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    your story is awesome... stop doubting yourself....
    May 30th, 2010 at 07:28pm
  • horserideraja

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    blah! u complain about 40 subscribers x.X ive only got like 15 at most. but ur story iiiiiiissss amazing
    May 30th, 2010 at 06:09pm
  • Post-It

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    Awesome chapters!
    I love how Michael doesn't know she's a vampire, actually I love Michael period. You make him so witty.
    Can't wait for more =]
    Good luck with the exams!
    May 29th, 2010 at 08:49pm
  • aruchan

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    Um inspiring comment.... Hmmm..... Let's see here..... I really like your characters, they are very lovable and have very distinguishable personalities! I love the little witty remarks you stick in there, laughs always help, and just keep going with your story line, cause I like it's uniqueness! There I think that was at least kind of inspiring! If not, well... At least I tried! XD
    May 29th, 2010 at 12:17am
  • How He Loves

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    haha. I love your story! Always makes me laugh =)
    May 28th, 2010 at 06:45pm
  • aruchan

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    Love you story! Soon as school work disapears write mire, please!
    May 25th, 2010 at 09:01pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    No, school does come first so I completely understand.
    That was evil!! hehe!! I love it!!
    May 25th, 2010 at 07:00pm
  • How He Loves

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    I love your story!!! You must write more soon!!! Got it??? <3
    May 25th, 2010 at 05:41pm
  • InvincibleZebra

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    i like it
    May 17th, 2010 at 12:46am
  • OliveRein

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    heeee....:}
    May 17th, 2010 at 12:31am
  • Kimm

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    *click on story link*
    hm.
    *click on character list*
    OMG OJALFJLKASFLAS OMG ! ABS!!!!!!!
    -reads-
    May 16th, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    That's soo cute!! I love it!! They're really funny. :D!!
    May 14th, 2010 at 02:46am
  • Post-It

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    Love it!
    Your writing always makes me laugh, pure genius lol.
    Can't wait for this next chapter ;)
    May 14th, 2010 at 02:23am