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  • grace_lou_freebush

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    I know that this story is over now, but I couldn't resist a comment! I loved this story! It made me happy and frustrated and sad and happy again! Haha I love it when a story gets me emotionally involved. Great work on all your stories!
    January 31st, 2013 at 03:28am
  • Nikki_Alex

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    Love it!!!!!!! i’m about to read the next chapter
    May 15th, 2011 at 12:42am
  • leileiluv

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    So, if it makes you feel any better I absolutely enjoyed this story. I was really moved by the whole story and everything. I just read this whole story from start to finish!
    I would think that it would be a great idea if Kayla had her own POV but if it has a purpose or something, not as a filler, well you could but...

    I loved how his last name was Belikov, it reminded of the Vampire Academy series, and I loved how you got the whole Ancient idea, I'm guessing from the Black Dagger Brotherhood series(: Yes, I have read and absolutely love both of them!

    haha anyways, I see that you like the whole vampire story thing, so you should totally check out my story I'm Just Another Bloodwhore... Or Am I? And let me know what you think!
    <3LeiLei
    May 2nd, 2011 at 02:04am
  • aruchan

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    I would also like to add that I think Kayla should for sure be in the other stories for sure, but with her own p.o.v ONLY IF it will contribute to the plot-line somehow, but if you are just giving her a p.o.v for the sake of giving her a p.o.v then no she shouldn't have one... hope that helps.
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:10am
  • aruchan

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    Oh my goodness! I love the ending so much! :D Its so cute and made me all happy inside!!! I was so worried about them for a while, but yay! Happy ending time! XD
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:08am
  • Post-It

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    So tearful right now, that was so perfect!
    I am so relieved they worked things out, I knew they would but then I had my suspicions that you might have ended it with them just being friends! But awesome, so cute and romantic and just brilliant!

    You better keep Kyla in these other stories with her own POV.
    'Cause in my mind it will be like this story hasn't really finished (gah but it has :'( a million sad faces!)
    But it has been an amazing story, you should be very proud of it!
    You amazing beautiful writer!
    Can't wait to read your new stuff and the new chapter for I'm Simply Leaving.
    <3

    I loved the ending chapters by the way incase you didn't pick up on that :)
    March 21st, 2011 at 12:15pm
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    I loved how it ended can not wait for more storys
    March 21st, 2011 at 03:17am
  • Samynator

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    OMG, I nearly cried :')
    March 20th, 2011 at 10:07pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    Awwwwwwww, that was adorable. :)
    I thought for sure that Michael was going to become all bitchy again, and I was going to throw a damn fit. But then he made up for it, but seriously! Did he have to be so mean??? :( She didn't really lie to him, and I'm holding to that. She just didn't tell him, and honestly, he didn't ask.... okay I'm done whining. ahaha.
    But that was so adorable!!!!! :D!! I'm soo glad that they're both happy and I can't wait till the chapter tomorrow! :D!!!
    Umm... I think I said this before, but it's seriously up to you. I'd love to hear from her, but I'd love it no matter what. :) Happy writing. :D
    March 20th, 2011 at 05:34pm
  • AspiringToLive

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    *smiles, content* THAT is what I wanted. Happy vampires. *smiles again* Thank you very, very much for not ending this on us with a cliff. I think I would have died a little inside. I can't wait to read what you have planned for them. I'm sure it will make me happy. SOOOOOO please update? Soon? Thank you(:
    March 20th, 2011 at 03:36pm
  • horserideraja

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    SHE NEEDS HER OWN POINT OF VIEW. END OF STORY MY BUTT.
    March 20th, 2011 at 02:39pm
  • OliveRein

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    ....why would you do that to all of us? :(
    March 20th, 2011 at 03:33am
  • MirrorRain

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    GAHAHA!! YOU LEFT THE CHAPTER HANGING LIKE THAT!?!?! *falls off chair*
    March 20th, 2011 at 02:34am
  • pyromaniac123

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    you couldnt have posted this one and the last one at the same time!? are we some sick science experiment during which you test the reactions to your best cliffhangers!? would it have been so terrible difficult to take the extra two minutes and post the rest of your grasping story to put us out of our inflicted misery?

    lol but seriously- UPDATE!
    March 19th, 2011 at 10:21pm
  • AspiringToLive

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    I just read all of the chapters you have on this story this morning, and when I finally get to the last one, unbeknownst to me, it was a cliffhanger!!!!! Please, Please, Please, Please update!!!!!!! I want happy vampires!!! Thank you!
    March 19th, 2011 at 09:50pm
  • horserideraja

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    idontwantittobeover. thisisntfair. T.T
    March 19th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    You're really just teasing us on purpose...
    But awwwww, she's sooo cute!!! I love how she got nervous then. :D! That's awesome. :D
    Happy smiles!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D YAY!
    March 19th, 2011 at 03:59pm
  • BananaILoveYou.

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    Ahaha. Luffles it
    March 19th, 2011 at 02:16am
  • silvermoonshadow27

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    MORE! MORE! WHEN DO WE GET MORE? PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!
    March 18th, 2011 at 08:55pm
  • hatsu-kouen2143

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    He made it!!! :D!! YAY!!!! Awww, he's so cute. :D
    Ahahahaha. :D! They were friends the whole time. :D Awwww, how cute. :D
    You're just teasing us with these snippets... :D Can't wait! :D
    March 18th, 2011 at 05:58pm
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