I actually could care less for the pics that are in it. But I read with a set picture in my mind, and don't need help envisioning things.And since you're using famous people, most people already know what they look like, so it's kind of an unneccessary thing. But other than that, good story.:)
C: I love it! Justin Timberlake IS fosho hawt. ;D good job on the update! I love how you add random pictures that help us vision it better(: Your different!