I gotta say that I just read this whole story and it absolutely fucking amazing The plot, the characters and everything were just fantastic This is one of the storie that you could nevre get sick of reading I just read it completely and I just had to keep rading what happens to Charlie and Brian It was funny dramatic and romanitc altogether Seriously there aren't ,any stories on here that could do that to me And I've read alot Awesome job :)
I love this story. This is honestly one of those stories that you can rean and nevr get sick off. They're aren't many stories out that like them, but this is definetely one of them. And your an amazing author really. And I promise I don't say it unless I mean it.
Hmm....WOW. I LOVED that ending, was totally not expecting that but it was amazing! I love how she and Damien came across each other and talked things out and how she surprised him with what she said. I think, that if you do end up writing a sequel, that that idea is great. About Finn and Charlie and Brian's kid. That would be really sweet :] Sad to see this story go, but it was great!
I absolutely LOVED IT!!! It's really bittersweet because I never wanted this story to end but it was a very good ending. I couldn't have thought of a better ending for this story... I'm glad to see that Tommy got what he deserve and that Charlie finally let go of her past and faced Damien again. All I can say is thank you so much for such a beautiful story!!!
I loved the ending it was amazing! Kind of a full circle now :] This was ana amazing story and I loved every update! Thank you for writing something so addicting and captivating!
I think that was a very fitting ending. Loved seeing a glimpse of Finn and to know that Brian and Charlie are getting married and expecting their own bundle of joy. :D
It was nice how you threw that scene with Damian in. It was nice to see how she moved on from that time in her life, close the door on the old and fully embraced the new.
I am really sad to see this story go. I really enjoyed reading it and if you do decide to create a sequel I would love to read it, but the choice is obviously up to you. haha. It didn't end the way I thought it would, but I think the ending is fitting, and I am so happy that Tommy got what was coming to him.
Aww, she's pregnant!!! And she's left Damien behind....on good terms? Wow, wasn't expecting that! I loved the little bit about Leana and Finn, it summed everything up nicely and just gave everything that rainbow-happy-smily vibe before the end. Good job ; D
...IT'S OVERRRRRRR?!?!? All I can say is that this is one of the best stories that I have ever read. EVER. And as sad as I am that it's over, it was a perfect ending. Now, I'm sure you're wondering: am I looking forward to the (possible) sequel? I only have one thing to say:
this is not shit. I totally love this update. I'm so happy that Brian called Jimmy and Leana and that he found her, and that Charlie finally opened up to him and their whole scene together on the beach under the pier. I love this chapter.
They are going to get through this. I know they will.
and it is totally cool that you borrowed the 'knight in shining tattoos' thing. I can't remember where it came from, if I read it somewhere or heard it or made it up with friends. I many not remember how it came to be but I love the phrase. ;D
I am going to be so sad to see this story end. I love Brian and Charlie, all their flaws and everything it makes them more than characters in a story, it makes them seem like real people.