August 11th, 2009 at 02:55pm
Framing The Famous - Comments
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loved how u added in those photos!! haha, she tottally wants to bang syn already... i wonder how long she can hold out for!!! cant wait for more!! :D :DAugust 11th, 2009 at 02:25pm
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yay i looooooveeee this story too!! zacks adorable and so is matt...and brian is a complete ass...oh well. he's still a sexy dude:)August 11th, 2009 at 03:06am
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ha!i love zacky
plus i'm glad she's making friends
with everyone
update soon plz :]August 10th, 2009 at 05:20pm -
dude, i cant believe ur not on more than 3 stars love this!!!
:DAugust 10th, 2009 at 09:16am -
haha. I thought it was awesome how she came into the room and took control of the situation, helping Zacky with his hair, and finding Jimmy's drumstick.
and I loved the "Oi, string bean" bit. :mrgreen:
great update! Can't wait to read more! :coffee:August 10th, 2009 at 03:28am -
Hahaha she's tough, i like her! Thats what bri needs. A good tough girl like her.*nods*
Thinks he can get a hug? Pfft bitch please go hug you're momma. Lol
Great update I want more!August 9th, 2009 at 08:46pm -
I really like the story so far! I really like charlie, she is a great character and I cannot wait to read more! :coffee:
oh, and I really liked how you wrote this one part of the intro:
"Now, as he looked down at the frowning face of his wife, happiness consumed him, thankful that he had found the only woman able to ‘tame’ him. His tattooed friend had no idea what he was missing out on. Then again, maybe he did, and that was the problem."
I really like how you used that as a possible insight into why Brian was acting the way he did, and I just really liked the phrasing of it in general. :mrgreen:
oh, and I had a laugh when she shot Brian down! it was so funny, and he was so shocked.August 9th, 2009 at 06:58am -
I'm loving it(:
Update soon?!
Oh and the pixx u chose for the last chapter were gorgous(:
I love the story overall though(:
Haha sorry I'm rambling!August 7th, 2009 at 10:16pm -
I found and love the story! Youre a great writer! I love Charlie's character!
Update soon!August 7th, 2009 at 07:26pm -
i agree with rhie
had it been anyone else
she would have raped them lol X]
well atleast everyone's
taking a shine to her and her pics
which were amazing btw
update soon plz :]August 7th, 2009 at 02:49pm -
yeap, this is for sure going to be one of my favourite stories i can already tell!! :D
i love how she sized syn up and decided if it was any other guy she'd be all over him! mad me laugh!
cant wait for more!!!August 7th, 2009 at 12:43pm -
interesting...
ultimate face-off
lol sounds good
i wanna know more
update soon plz :]August 6th, 2009 at 01:59am -
wow, this is really good. ur writing is amazing in this story, i hope u stick with it!! a lot of potential! cant wait for more!!
:DAugust 6th, 2009 at 01:34am -
oh man i cant wait to see what happens next :-)August 5th, 2009 at 06:28pm
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Eh? Its A Good Plot I kinda Like it But I don't Like your story Layout...... Sorry to be Rude I dont Mean too but I always Seem so mean Oh well cant wait for moreAugust 4th, 2009 at 03:15pm
I love it. I love how you described the characters so perfectly and how it's done so well. :]
You have talent, sweets. :]
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peace,
dani