Okay I realize that this story ended a while ago, but I figured since I read it all in one night I'd just give you a comment anyway. (: The whole thing was cliche, half the time it doesn't turn out well even if you pull everything out. But this one was amazing. Basically because it was well written throughout the whole thing. It was a perfect balance of cliche but still originality. I loved everything about it. :D Been trying to find good stories to read that aren't fanfics cause most of them are and I saw this one. It's just unbelievably amazing. (: Off to read your other stuff.