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  • colored-euphoria

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    I think this would be a really great story if you slowed it down a little and made the rising action build up more before you get to the climax of getting married and what not.
    February 24th, 2011 at 04:54am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    Nawww ^-^
    This almost made me cry.
    Seriously.
    More than a year and its over <3
    I loved it [:
    February 22nd, 2011 at 07:36am
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    O.o oh my god... just... wow.
    September 15th, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • D. Dixon

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    O_O Holy damn! Great update. I hope everything goes okay. >.< More soon!
    September 15th, 2010 at 01:43am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    Dude! no! dude! dude! dude!!!!
    They better be oh-fucking-kay!
    and the baby! D:
    no!
    how could you!
    bitch!
    write more!
    now!
    September 14th, 2010 at 11:35pm
  • trecool567

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    Awh, I really like this storie a lot. It was little rocky in teh begining, but it got really good =)
    Your an awesome writer and I can't wait to read more of this when its updated!

    -Katie
    July 7th, 2010 at 11:45pm
  • D. Dixon

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    Tis a very very interesting story you've got here, Carrie m'dear! ^_^ I likes it mucho! :D My sister told me there was somebody in here based on me...is that true? More soon. :]
    July 7th, 2010 at 08:27am
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    I could just kill jason... problem solved! lol..... and nice...at least i know now.... still mad though...
    July 2nd, 2010 at 08:15pm
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    Nawwwwwwwwww :3
    I don't know whether to smile or cry!
    July 2nd, 2010 at 06:48am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    Oh yeah!!!
    AND WRITE!
    July 1st, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    I'm PREGNANT!!!!!!
    WITH GERARD WAY'S BABY!
    Oh yeah!
    Dude....
    I love you!
    July 1st, 2010 at 11:09pm
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    only three words for your update....

    WHAT THE FUCK!!!
    July 1st, 2010 at 11:07pm
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    update now!! *growls* or I will... will... I will let my dog eat you! *stares at small puppy*

    yup, she'll eat you.!
    July 1st, 2010 at 06:51am
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    I think this needs more comments.... so I am commenting, randomly! to tell you I miss you, and I miss this story... bye!
    April 23rd, 2010 at 01:41am
  • They.Call.Me.Alice

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    Love as always chica doll.
    Updates sooner though would be nice.
    Lolllllliiiiessss.
    February 27th, 2010 at 03:24am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    1. I love XD
    and 2. I hate because...you need an update likee....now

    But i love it moreeeee :D
    February 26th, 2010 at 11:44pm
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    Ahh....the love of comic books... I know that passion, and all the geekiy dorkness Ray, dont worry pal..but seriously, Ray, you and Jordon both need to stop jumping to conclusions.... cause you get them wrong.... *sigh* seriously.... but damn... Tiffi.... no need to freak out and cry just yet... wait till after the yelling, and after you punch him in the face....sorry Ray...
    February 26th, 2010 at 11:29pm
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    awww.....that was so cute! confusing, but I loved it!!! Amazingnessssss!!! Finally another one, but damn.....Frankie was funny, yet seemed a little slutty! I loved it!! Ahh!! I love you Bri!!!
    January 28th, 2010 at 04:03am
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    OMG!!!OMG!!OMG!!OMG!!! O_o

    YAYAYAYYAAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!! I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU! I FUCKING LOVE YOU!!! your story is getting posted soon now, like after I re-read this 20 times....

    YAY!! YAY! YAY!!! My favorite chapter so far!! YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I fucking love you, you are now my favorite best friend of the day!!! YAY!!!

    we kissed! MIKEY FUCKING WAY LOVES ME! and was snotty to a nurse and made a man faint...dude! I love this chapter!! AH!HH!!!H!H!H!H!HAH!H!H!H
    November 8th, 2009 at 06:52pm
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    sooo...... this may seem odd, cause it has been a while since you've posted anything, but i had just re-read it three times in a row, cause it was stuck in my head for the past week, damn you for making a good story, and damn me for loving this story...normally i would text you and bug you to update, but im not going to bug you, and my phone is off, and i dont know when it will be on, so sorry if i haven't talked to you in a while... o_o

    did I ever tell you how much i seriously fucking love this story.... tis amazing, espcially when you have read it as much as i have lately...keeps getting better, ive keep finding little things ive missed cause i was so excited for an update i didn't catch them...

    ily!

    loves
    Mikey
    October 18th, 2009 at 08:59am
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