Of Rage And Love - Comments

it's so chilling how well you write your story to how the whole album is. i can't wait to read more.

I loved this update! Thank you :D

YOU UPDATED! In response to your text: yes, it did take you long enough. ;)

I like how the characters are all kind of coming together now. And I liked that Jimmy was vaguely happy/content in this chapter; it doesn't seem to happen a lot. xDD

I noticed some teeny tiny typos:

"Right. Yeah, I just kind of... I'd wanted to leave for ages, and I had a bad couple of days with my mpm and my step-dad and stuff and just kind of... Roped Tunny into coming with me. nd Chris tagged along...

I'm pretty sure that should be 'mom' and 'And', not 'mpm' and 'nd'. xD

"Yeah, Gloria is the same age as him. I'm sure Trev is gonna ]love it when another fifteen year old arrives in his bar."

There's a bracket in front of the 'love' which you probably accidentally put in when you were italicising it.

But yeah. That's just me being all nitpicky. I still adore this story and can't wait to see it progress further! <3

Pleeeeeease update! :)

I love it! :)

“Twitch!” He was cut off. A window had opened on the third floor of the building they were standing in front of, and a very irritated looking woman was leaning out of it. “Either shut the fuck up or get in here and go to bed!”

“You ruin all my fun!” He yells back up at her.

“I’m gonna start throwing your stuff out of the window if you’re not in this building by the time I count to ten…” She smirked wickedly.

“Ah fuck, woman, I’m in. I’m in!” He quickly stumbled up the few steps to the front door and into the building.

That seriously made me giggle. Such a great capture of him x3 This chapter was really cute, I like how you're using Maria and Gloria more now (: can't wait for the next update!

Loved the Rev's character. The last line made me laugh. :D

This. Is. BRILLIANT.
I love the way this is written, probably one of the best stories I've read based on American Idiot. You've got yourself a new subscriber ;)

UGH Twitch you little alcohol fiend XD I love this story so much! (:

WHOOOO YOU UPDATED. Great job as always, m'dear. I'm very excited to see where this story is heading. :)

My Spidey-sense, er, senses chemistry between Ser and Jimmy. *waggles eyebrows*

You should update this. I even subscribed so I'll know if you did. Please?

I'm thinking you need to update this.

I miss finding out that you've updated, freaking out and then squealing over what you've written.

I know I say/write teh same goshdarned (LOL) thing every single time I comment, but once again, I LOVE IT!!!!! Like, for serious, i really loved this chapter! A bit short for my liking ;] But it beats having nothing at all! x] I just... I really like the way it's written, and how upset Jimmy is, it's very... nice, in a wierd, non-sadistic way, I swear!

More soon? *failing attempt at adorablepuppy dig eyes glossy eyes of Castiel*

Sweet!!! an update!!!lovin it:)

Awh, I can just imagine Christian and Jimmy staring at everything wide eyed, like being to the zoo for the first time. I absolutely love it (:

I'm guessing you got Marie's name from the song on the B-Side for Waiting?
lovin by the way:)please update soon:)

Just stopping by to say that I love the update, and I can't wait to see the story progress further :) I feel like I've become attached to the main characters in a way...I've realised that I'm weirdly fond of Jimmy!

Also, I think there was a teeny tiny typo in there somewhere; you put 'who's' instead of 'whose'? But I'm just nitpicking, so ignore me. xD

Ugh I hate Brad, in like every story XD Jimmy getting out of Jingletown is probably the best thing he could ever do so far!

Holyyyy crap. I love this. I can't wait.

Dang, girl!
That was far too sad ]: But very, very,, very gooooood
(sorry, I'm kindda sucky at commenting and giving concrit todayam I ever good at that!? LOL!)
Loved it though, as per usual!! love you as well, xoxoxoxox