Trembling With the Strings - Comments

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww poor her! She pissedof her bro...unintenionally-and hr sis...came back?Hope she doesnt get in Dray's pants!:P

What the hell was the "reasonable choice"?
COME. ON.

I wonder what this story would be like if it was on steroids...

I don't like Marcus anymore. ):

NeverShoutTana:

I believe gracie got what she deserves. She whines too much for my liking. She can never go with the flow. She's just annoying.

I actually agree with you. :omfg:

I just find her character to be more... I don't know, aggravating. It seems like I keep on getting mad at her every time she starts whining or crying... damn, she's emotional!

But I still love the story, as well. :D

haha her brother hates her! i'm starting to wonder if im a sadist. Oh well. Hehehehe I believe gracie got what she deserves. She whines too much for my liking. She can never go with the flow. She's just annoying. I still love the story, though.

eep! I take down what i said! he could've killed the baby. OOO that would have been DRama! ha i would have loved it

not to be mean but i'm with Darius. She should have been changed then. Wasn't it enough to loose a baby? She wants the baby but she's to selfish to protect him. Anyways i'm going to the next chapter :)

ooooh i so love himmore and dang it! Whyd the girl die!?!??!?!UGH! lol... update plz

(: More before I hunt you down and feed you to a chicken.

I hate it when you do this! Cliffhangers were made by the devil.

Damn. The baby disappeared. That's creepy, man.

WHY?! Why do you leave clifhangers?! It's mean. *pouts*

radio_rain_dreams:

wtf i change my mind!I hate lyndell-how dare he split his body in two

Um... haha. I don't know why, but that just made me laugh. xD

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Dang, there are hella drama happening now! :don:

wtf i change my mind!I hate lyndell-how dare he split his body in two

:o oh no.

pls dont let him ruin it
for dem pls pls pls
oh and update soon
xx =]

i love this song!! like seriously you should write more!
when i started reading this story of yours i couldnt stop readin until i finished!!!
and i started at like 6 and now its 9:30 pm! =P

omg omg love iT!!!!I read the whole thing in a day plz update!grrrrrrrrrrrrrr Darius is so mean to her lil bro,,,and the last few words were epic...cant wait to see what happenssssssss

good god he bit her brother? Fuckin crazo lolz jk jk i still love him but seriously? oh wow hope he's play

NeverShoutTana:

I mean and just don't want her to be pregnant at all. Why would she even want to have a baby with a man who doesn't want the baby? Why would she want the baby at all. I'm against abortions but this is one of those cases where it's for the best. He not only basically beats her but hes so controlling towards her why would she want his little bastard in her [yes i'm being a mega bitch]. And the whole adoption thing with Dante. That won't change the fact that they had the kid. It will still be darius's and Gracie's baby. It won't change a got damn thing and it would be harder on Gracie to sit back why some other fucker took care of her kid. It's for the best just to abort the kid. :|

I wouldn't say she should abort it but she could have a miscarriage.