September 9th, 2009 at 01:53am
Trembling With the Strings - Comments
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NNOOOOOOO MARK!! PLEASE SAY HE'S ALRIGHT!PLEASE SAY HE'S ALRIGHT!!!!!!!!September 9th, 2009 at 01:39am
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AWWW maybe they will keep the baby!:):)September 9th, 2009 at 01:35am
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You are entitled to your opinions and I love that you have them. Just be patient. i know what I want to do with this story, and she is going to have the baby. But here's something to remember for my writings of vampires: *little bit of a spoiler* I believe that halves would have a small rate of survival due to biological problems. I won't say anymore on the matter other than that there still is a lot left to happen.September 8th, 2009 at 02:59am
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I mean and just don't want her to be pregnant at all. Why would she even want to have a baby with a man who doesn't want the baby? Why would she want the baby at all. I'm against abortions but this is one of those cases where it's for the best. He not only basically beats her but hes so controlling towards her why would she want his little bastard in her [yes i'm being a mega bitch]. And the whole adoption thing with Dante. That won't change the fact that they had the kid. It will still be darius's and Gracie's baby. It won't change a got damn thing and it would be harder on Gracie to sit back why some other fucker took care of her kid. It's for the best just to abort the kid. :|September 8th, 2009 at 01:46am
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awwwwwwwww
thats cute but i wanted them to keep the
baby =]September 7th, 2009 at 11:47pm -
Sounds fair enough to me.
I wanted to cry, too, as they both started to cry together. =[September 7th, 2009 at 10:43pm -
That was really really good :dSeptember 7th, 2009 at 10:34pm
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ave u thought about a sequel
it will be good =]
oh btw u betta not get rid of the baby
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Please update? Because...I don't. Because I want you too, because I want to know what happens to poor Gracie. =[. Poor girl.September 7th, 2009 at 09:32pm
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Oh my, you all crack me up =P
and don't worry, i'm not going to turn this into another one of those unoriginal stories, I have big plans for how this is going to work
But it might make me cry while doing so, so perceive that however you wish because I won't tell! ;DSeptember 7th, 2009 at 08:27pm -
I agree! He is pretty damn stupid! Haha, but I suppose that was his you-know-what talking, so he couldn't really control himself.- ISurrenderEverything:
- And to see that he doens't want to have the kid - when he should have been well aware of what sex brings. Hellloo, it's how kids are made.
Then again, he had a hell of a long time to control his hormonal issues... :XD
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I'm quite shocked that Gracie even had the guts to run away from him like that, but I am more shocked that Darius didn't even do anything to stop her! My God, what a dumb butt. :twitch:September 7th, 2009 at 07:01pm -
I just found your story.
And my - I'm addicted. I get pissed off at Darius so much, but I still find myself reading it because it's jsut so...Er, sickly interesting.
In a weird way. I'm not saying your writing is sick, it's actually really great. To be honest.
But if I were GRacie, I don't know, I'd at least try to pound ihis head into a wall unsucessfuly.
But that's jsut me. And to see that he doens't want to have the kid - when he should have been well aware of what sex brings. Hellloo, it's how kids are made. Does he know that?
Anyways, I'll stop my yipper yapping.
Update soon, please?September 7th, 2009 at 04:09pm -
ohh let me explain wat i meant earlier. ur story is not that original but pulls the reader in, if u add a half vamp baby ur story would loose almost all originality. i mean it'll be another oh-no-i'm-pregnant-by-a-vampire-who-i-barely-love kind of story which everyone has done. can for once someone change it up and get rid of the bby. i'm dieing for a change :]September 7th, 2009 at 11:44am
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am i the only one that wants her to abort the baby? i mean if she has the baby ur story will loose wat little originality it does have, i suggest he regrets it after the abortion or something, anything to save ur story's originalitySeptember 7th, 2009 at 11:34am
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i'm up to 65! cant wait for 66! ah its so exciting!!!September 7th, 2009 at 09:05am
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yay
a baby
i loved it
update again soon
plz
:)September 6th, 2009 at 07:54pm -
You, you broke them up? how could you?! You monster!!! *sniffles*:(September 6th, 2009 at 06:49pm
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i know the last chapter was supposed to be serious but i was laughing my ass off and i still am lolSeptember 6th, 2009 at 11:10am
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Jesus, 80?! My God!- Panda Eyes:
- Too bad I already have 80 chapters typed up!
Now I want to BADLY know if they're gonna keep it or not!
I believe they are going to, though.September 6th, 2009 at 07:15am
I was listening to my Ipod when this song came on by the way by hinder it kind of remind me of this story.