A Totally Original Story About Vampires, Pete Wentz, And A Girl Named Mary Sue - Comments

  • southpaw

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    This made me laugh so hard. You rule.
    June 6th, 2010 at 04:58pm
  • the skeleton crew

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    wellhaithur. i know that you probably haven't checked this story in a while, but if you randomly check this... update it soon-ish...? please :3
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:47am
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    wellhaithur. i know that you probably haven't checked this story in a while, but if you randomly check this... update it soon-ish...? please :3
    February 8th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • RiotForYourHeart

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    You my dear are awesome xD So how many chapters until Brendon Urie walks into her life and there is a total instant sexual attraction between them causing her to get drunk and cheat on Pete with him after an argument over her lettuce victim past and she hates her self for it and then gets preggers and doesn't know if it's Pete's or Brendon's but it doesn't matter because pete will always stand by her and actually her womb goes agains anything and everything science ever taught us and she has twins and one of them is Pete's and on of them in Brendon's?
    December 30th, 2009 at 02:22am
  • TheNewFoShizzle

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    Okay, I don't want to multi-post that badly so I'll cover the three comments I haven't responded to all in one comment.

    UnFlappaBelle: I aim to amuse. =)

    Little-Nikki: lol. I figured, if Stephanie Meyer can get famous without character developement, so can I! Only I'll do it BETTER. (I don't know if you're a Twilight fan, but I have to say that is the primary reason I can't stand those books. =/)

    DeathUponArrival: =) Thanks! Glad I could give out some giggles.
    August 24th, 2009 at 05:41pm
  • TheNewFoShizzle

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    BlacklingXD:
    I haven't even read the story yet, but from your description and the titles, I'm already cracking up.

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    lol well once you read it, I hope you like it.
    August 24th, 2009 at 05:39pm
  • DeathUponArrival

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    :lmfao I found this story to be really hilarious. Good work!
    August 24th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • NikNakPatyWak

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    Chapter one of her little original description got me the case of the giggles!
    xP
    August 15th, 2009 at 01:28am
  • UnFlappaBelle

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    This made me laugh :P
    August 13th, 2009 at 08:46pm
  • BlacklingXD

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    I haven't even read the story yet, but from your description and the titles, I'm already cracking up.

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    August 12th, 2009 at 06:53am
  • TheNewFoShizzle

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    WordsOfWisdom:
    Wow, this is great.
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    lol. Thanks! Glad you like it. As the description says, this was originally on quizilla where those types of cliches ran rampant. I'm not sure how common they are on Mibba--not as bad, for sure--but I still definitely see them often enough to take note. So, I figured I'd transfer the story here. ^.^
    August 10th, 2009 at 05:31pm
  • Wolverine.

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    Wow, this is great.
    :D
    August 10th, 2009 at 05:29pm