All You Did Was Save My Life - Comments

Love this story!!
Cant wait for more of it!

wow! i loved it. Max was too funny tho, and everything was perfect. lol
i love how the guys were playing nhl game, its like they can't get enough of it, lol.
amazing job. can't wait for the next one!!!!

I have taken to planning my incredible comments, so that you know!

Flower - I just love him; from him rubbing Autumn's baby belly, to shouting at her about the language gap as well as encouraging/shouting down whoever is playing the Pens as a player in the video game. Guess poor old Ireland got abandoned to the mercies of the women as the men got involved with their sports....

NHL Game - ...That is, of course, until Autumn decided to take on her husband in a totally ROFL moment. I loved it. Especially Flower's commentary...

Language/Geno - Flower and then Geno talking definitely a ROFL moment, especially when Autumn apologises for the tomato incident...in French [snorts of laughter]... Then when Geno is talking himself, also good... but never better than when...

Cookie - ... Geno comes out with Woman of the Night in response to Staalsy's hook up with Cookie (yes, we do like the monicker Cookie Monster), not to mention all the banter about her "profession", real, imagined, or otherwise.

Baby - Taking a leak on the ultrasound and showing it was a boy...? LOVED it.. Genius!

Hank - A mention of and for little old me! Broad grin here! Can't wait for the words you put into my mouth one day! Groin strain - oh I remember that chat ROFL

And.... special mention for Vero's foul and hilarious mouth, Ireland turning Max on in the car and (who could forget) TK coming our and doing his thing against the car window.

Your exceptional skill really comes with the words you give your characters - you make it just seem like they are talking for themselves, just as we would as a group of friends around for a get-together and you also paint a gorgeous picture, without going overboard with the description.

Spot on as always - showing the competition how it's done and wiping the floor with them...

Waiting anxiously for more!!

That was a cute chapter =]
Cookie Monster? LMAO.

Cookie, haha.
Awe, poor Ryan.
"I'm staying single forever." - LOL.

oh goodness, that was great!! I loved it. I love Autumn, she is awesome. I'm curious if someone is gonna say something to Jordan about his "friend" LOL
keep up the amazing work!!!

Oh WOW!

First off - my fave bit was the altrication between Biscuit..sorry I mean Cookie, and Autumn, with some Sid and Ryan thrown in for good measure.

And the adding to the story of Ryan's ADHD - you have no idea how many times I wish my brothers had been diagnosed I tell ya!

Great chapter... but Jordy.... your taste in overnight guests leaves a LOT to be desired...

The end of the chapter made me laugh. I loved it just like you thought I would.

Wow! I hope Ireland gets what's coming to her when Sid tells Max about the conversation. Oh man, I can't wait for more!!

UH OH!!! WTF is going on ?! Enquiring minds want to know! NOW!!!

Holy sh..... Amd there I thought she might have been talking to Max - boy was I wrong,

When did Ireland become the bad girl? You have to tell me these things! You do! Shocks like this are bad for my heart!

Great chapter, looking forward to the next - we taking a dip back into the past?
xx

I want to reach through this computer and slap that little lying hoe! I can't believe she's cheating in Max! I wanna know who she's cheating on him with.

LOL, I definitely don't like Ireland anymore...that's okay though, I'll step in and take her place with Max =]

amazing, as always. you've got me interested in what's happening with ireland and max...and the crosby clan is just too funny. loved it. keep up the stellar work!

Awe, eight years later and still in that honeymoon phase =]

Now you've got me all worried about Max/Ireland.

I absolutely love this chapter! Ireland's digs at the happy duo are hilarious... especially over their sons' hair - pretty little girls LOL.

Plus Ashton already charming the ladeez? Yeah. We can see that for sure LOL....

We all wanna know what's up with Ireland though... mind you, we want to see what's going on in the "here and now"!

Really, really good chapter - funny, descriptive, imaginative...I loved it!

Sorry this is so short! More please!!

Bumpy!!! I love it.

You did a good job. I love long chapters

LOL. Kieran and Madelaine? Too cute =]
Ashton's nine months old and she's six months along already? Sheesh, they didn't waste any time! =]
Taylor lives with them? She must be happy.....of course, I would be too.
Ryan's at grandma and grandpa's? As in, Grandma and Grandpa Crosby? Has Troy FINALLY stopped being a prick?
Oh the puppy dog eyes =]
Bumpy? Awe =]
Sigh, I pretty much just loved the whole chapter. I think this might be my favorite chapter of this story yet =]

I loved it! Poor Autumn, having all those kids and Sid still wants one more? LOL
I loved this chapter. It was amazing! you seem to have a way with words!!! keep up the great work!! this is my favorite future chapter!!!!

All
Those
Kids!
My lord!

You did a fantastic job girl. You had me laughing and awwing through the whole thing.

All those kids? Those poor girls and my namesake with more than one on board? Oh dear. Can’t wait for that LOL!

I just love Maddie. She’s so cute – and Kieran already her boyfriend? Well they have to start somewhere but I bet Papa Max is feeling a tad (over) protective.

Using the Stanley Cup for breakfast? I bet the girls are ticked and it was also soooo cute to picture the two little ones “speaking” to bump. Totally, totally cute.

Poor Autumn- pregnant in summer. Ouch. With a teething baby too? Oh no!

And it sounds like all those Crosby boys are, to use a phrase of yours, cute like Daddy, smart like Mommy. Awwwww. The hair? I can see it now… But I can also picture the look on Max’s face when Maddy informs him that Kieran’s her boyfriend – yep. Just like her Mommy LOL.

And of course Kieran’s got hockey skills. They’re bred in! In which case Maddy’s doing the right thing by getting herself the Crosby man while he’s young… Good one chica! And too right Daddy is so proud. Of course he is…

Jackson dropping his Dad in it…oh it was priceless – totally priceless. I laughed and laughed. Mean Daddy! Those threats? Yeah… Mean Daddy.

Max teasing Mommy and Daddy about their…uh after hours activities. That was sooo funny. So was Autumn’s comeback. And Max’s teasing about the name if it’s a girl… (yeah yeah, I KNOW!) And the swimmers thing? “stern talking to the soldiers?” Genius – honey it was awesome. The comedy is genius! Not to mention Sid informing her that they need one more for the starting line-up – OK so an obvious one but not so obvious was Autumn telling Sid that he had a deal…so long as he carried and delivered the last one. THAT was a moment and a half, neatly deflected by Sid bowing down in front of his wife so to speak.

And then we find out about the closet scene. Jesus – what it about our hockey boys and the closets we keep dragging them into. Max’s comment about the “celebrating” and him and Ireland not being able to get in there – I really, really liked that too. I was laughing right out loud here!

And not the playoff beards and haircuts again? Please tell me that Sid’s beard has gotten better with age… Please?

But what really made me laugh? Sid being told not to do 100 MPH so Cassie doesn’t deliver in the back seat of the car…that two of their kids were conceived in. I hope she doesn’t know that!

Fantastic chapter – PLEASE feed me more of my hockey crack!