All You Did Was Save My Life - Comments

  • headintheclouds

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    I love Jordan in this one, even if its just mentioning him really, lol

    I love the talking with Sid and Autumn, especially about her going back to work.

    Keep up the amazing work and sorry this took so long to do
    August 23rd, 2009 at 04:59am
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    Awww! Uncle Jordy!!! How cute.

    Sid and his Daddy To Be book makes me smile.

    Love the shoutout...well if it was a shoutout.
    August 21st, 2009 at 10:32pm
  • kristinaoshea

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    Loved it!

    Of all the guys that would willingly camp out with a couple of kids, I can definitely picture Jordan Staal being the one. Too bad he wasn't my live-in babysitter =]

    Glad to see that they're starting to compromise on stuff, and that Sid didn't listen to Max's "advice" about just learning from the other dads on the team. I like a man who prepares =]
    August 21st, 2009 at 10:26pm
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    Cassie says thank you for the shout out!

    Great chapter - all the stuff about Vero and why the phone call ended just had me ROFL!

    Mind you, all the stuff about Ryan, Sid, the socks, the approved supplies list was just hilarious.

    I forgot to mention last chapter too... Autumn yanking the shirt out of his pants....I loved it!

    More please! Your demanding bestie wants more!
    August 21st, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    Ireland being in love already...awww. But sometimes that's just the way it goes. Thanks for a decent end to a horrible night - I did see the message in my inbox whilst browsing on the phone on the way home from work, and I read both your emails!

    It's a great chapter and I can't wait for the next one!xx
    August 21st, 2009 at 10:29am
  • headintheclouds

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    oh man i loved it! i love the talking with Autumn and Ireland, that was awesome and then at the end the Yummy Mummy shirt, was too cute!!
    Keep up the amazing work!!!
    August 21st, 2009 at 09:59am
  • kristinaoshea

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    That was cute =]
    It's good that Autumn's "there" for Ireland, and more importantly that she's not some stuck up trophy wife bitch.
    And, how can anyone NOT love Max or Sid that soon? =]
    August 20th, 2009 at 09:09pm
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    how funny running in sid and autumn and ryan at the mall.
    hehe
    can't wait for more!!
    August 19th, 2009 at 05:04am
  • kristinaoshea

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    I love this story too!

    Max would be the one to join the mile-high club with a Flyers girl. Sounds like he was successful in converting her to a Pens fan though =]

    You write Max really well. I like how close he is with the Crosby clan, and how they accept Ireland into their group right away, even if it's hard to believe that Max Talbot has a steady girlfriend =]

    You had me LOLing at the Cosmo (?) magazine scene and the "sex-haustion" comments =]
    August 19th, 2009 at 03:10am
  • Scoffricharter

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    Hell yes! I'm Syn girl!!!!!

    Any face, love the chapter. You did an awesome job. The revenge they had was awesome. Loved Ryan's reaction to Ireland.

    Love ya girl!!!
    August 18th, 2009 at 10:38pm
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    TWO chapters in one day???????? WOW!

    I like this one and I didn't see where it was coming from but I think the parting gift to Janelle and her ex a**hole was inspired. I really do.

    I thought Autumn and Ireland would get along... Now they're shopping together!

    [smirks] And the t-shirt and juice - so Martha's punishing her huh? LOL. Bet she's happy about that.

    And Ryan's reaction to Max having a girlfriend; priceless, just priceless!

    Great chapter! More please!
    August 18th, 2009 at 08:47pm
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    Do I have to tell you how much I liked the line... "And I'll be your ravisher today" - I love it, I love it, cause it's sooooo funny!

    Wonderful chapter. I do think it's cure that Ireland is worried about how the folks will take to her. I do. But unless you've been shoved into a social situation with a bunch of random rich and famous people, it can be quite a mental hurdle to get over.

    We knew Max wasn't going to let this one go. I think he's focussing on the fun, but who knew he and Ireland were so in tune? And I'm not talking about their singing along a duet to Nickleback's Rockstar either...

    Fantastic chapter! More, more, more!
    (PS I got in about 2 and a bit hours ago from the night shift and I haven't been to bed yet...)
    August 18th, 2009 at 12:13pm
  • headintheclouds

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    Loved the viking helmet! and the quote from rockstar, lol
    amazing job. can't wait to see what happens when she goes to sid's with max,
    great work!
    August 17th, 2009 at 11:00pm
  • Scoffricharter

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    Yay sexy time! She had on his Viking helmet....yeah man!
    August 17th, 2009 at 10:17pm
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    Now I'm not going to complain about the fact there's a lot of Sid and Autumn in this story (I am ashamed to admit I am missing the Womanizer), because this was a terrific chapter and the fight?

    Just terrific. but Sid's got to remember that he is 50 % responsible for this situation and he can't actually change that. Neither is them both throwing the blame on each other a good thing.

    Still, I guess they're getting to the making up? [big grin] well we all know how much they both like that!
    August 17th, 2009 at 04:57pm
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    He finally realized it! *Throws hands in air* YES!!!!!

    I loved it, good job.
    August 17th, 2009 at 12:33pm
  • headintheclouds

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    yay, that the fight is over!!
    i can't wait to see what else you have in store for the newly weds, plus max and ireland and tanger and michelle,
    keep up the great work!!!
    August 17th, 2009 at 07:15am
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    oh snap!!!
    August 17th, 2009 at 04:19am
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    Drama in Crosbyland....I like it!
    August 17th, 2009 at 02:18am
  • JustCallMeTrouble37

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    New picture? Max on the brain huh?

    I did not see most of thic chapter coming, Mrs "I'm going to lead my bestie down the proverbial garden path"

    But wow what a chapter! exciting, setting lots of things up... waiting for the next one with bated breath!

    Great one!
    August 17th, 2009 at 12:48am