All You Did Was Save My Life - Comments

After the technical hiccup, here's the chapter and it was brilliant! Really brilliant! Who knew that Max was such a...a....big.....sap inside really.

Lovely and tender. And he's obsessed with Ireland apparently. It's kind of obvious!

And I think she's equally gone on him. Awwwwww.

I liked her use of the "adjectives" to describe his...his... well, I don't think I need to elaborate LOL. Suffice to say it was hilarious.

Poor Max. Schooled and bowled over I think. And he's not bothered apparently...

Awww! They're together for more than just sex. Max is starting to fall hard for her.

i think writing max comes natural to you. its amazing how great it comes out.

more please!

Sexy time for Max! I found my shout out!

Love ya girl!

love it!!!

I was about to say er slightly dirty? when, to be fair, it is only in the last little bit it gets REALLY dirty. Godd song choice by the way. Oh dear, I do love those songs by Jace Everett, I really do.

So Papa Crosby is getting between the newly weds? Typical Papa - though if he doesn't chill out, he'd not going to get to be a Grandpapa. Full stop.

And Ireland showing up on Max's doorstep [massive grin] and she convinced a security guard at Mellon to tell her? Damn that girl is good, confident, knows what she wants etc etc etc

Fantastic chapter! MORE MORE MORE!!!! (I think Ireland might be in that frame of mind too)

staalsy is awesome
max is funny
autumn is the greatest of all!
keep up the amazing work

fantastic chapter and made me laugh lots - over Staalsy, over the hockey stick, over what they'll call the kid, over everything really.

Especially over Max fearing the tables were turned especially!!

Looking forward to the next chapter...

Jordan in a wife beater......yummy!

Good job girl. Loved it as always.

LMAO!!!

i wonder if geno would do the math in russian or english, LOL

Tanger made me laugh tho, LOL

great work! keep it up

I am still laughing from the picture of an entire room of Pens vets trying to do math in their head to come up with when.....wait a minute.....oh yeah..... Freaking hilarious. Still laughing. I'm sure if I were privy to that locker room (which I won't ever be, being a girl and all), I'd probably think the vets were a few screws shot of a toolbox.

Mind you Sid's reaction at Max's announcement that he'd met the One. While joining the mile high club. Almost as funny.

Really - awesome chapter and thankies xx!!

Max is a funny man.

Loved this chapter, but when do I not!

Fantastic chapter - loved the Staal and Talbot chat too - poor baby on the girl back home... Ouch.

So The Womanizer is obsessed with Ireland and Autumn's on a mission - LOL. This is all so great!

xx

oh man, quick update!

i love the talbot and staalsy talk, it was awesome.

can't wait for more!!!!!!

OH SNAP!!

Max is in for a long ride with her I bet, LOL

Great job!! Can't wait for more!!!

Oh. You weren't kidding.
I didn't see that one coming. AT ALL.

I think Max hs definitely met his match. Definitely. No competition whatsoever. Nuh uh.

Great chapter - please hurry up with the next one!

Good job girl! It was awesome! You have nothing to worry about on your use of first person.

Cool one- I am grinning like a mad thing and I don't know why you were so worried about writing in the first person...

....Cause this is great!

More please!

I love this so far. You put my all time favorite Maxie quote in the story. I love you even more now for that.

I feel so special having a story dedicated to me. Thank you!

Awesome job as always.

you aced this one. I loved it. I can't wait to see what you have planned for this one. are all the other couples going to make it into this one?