I can definitely say your story is original and none like any i have ever come acrossed. I want to thank you for taking your time and actually writing this....Lol you should take more of your time to write more. When you next update is when you sha'll hear from me again so til then tata :)
I enjoy your story. It's very original and a good break from some of the depressing stories on mibba, though some of those are good as well, that is beside the point. :)
Um...wow. :) I'm glad Colin feels a little better about finding Raya, even if it IS going to take forever. :|
I don't know why, but I got a bad feeling about Tessalyn when she started thinking about how she would change the future if she had to. Maybe she'll change the future for the worst without knowing? Or she'll suddenly think that Raya is wrong for Colin and prevent their love..IDK. I'm just being a little drama queen, I think. :lol:
Sorry it took me a while to get to it, but I did. And DON'T tell me that I didn't have to, because I feel it is my rightful duty as your BFF to read this, even if I haven't read some of the other stories you have up :cry: