Secrets of a Slytherin Princess - Comments

-gasps- you dreadful person you! ending it right there is so cruel! But I still love you! <3 I can't wait for the next update, to kill the suspense!

THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME.

Can't wait for the next one! :)

XD 'the Boy-Who-Refused-to-Die-No-Matter-What-Happened' has got to be my favorite line of the whole chapter! It is so down right hilarious! I love this story more and more with every chapter!
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yay updates! loved them both! fantastic as usual! Can't wait for the next one!!!!

<3 Charlie! he's such a funny guy and not to mention it's hilarious imagining him with two-toned hair! XD

I freaking love this story! Like you seriously have no idea how much is rocks my world to know I get to come home and read this! It should totally be part of the HP series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
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I just found this. I AM IN LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE.

Again, another good chapter. It fit in well, as I expected, it flowed nicely. It was a good realization on Snape's part...did I mention I never liked him? Even when I found that he was loyal, I had too much of a deep-rooted prejudice to let it go. I think you rather changed my opinion of that. He's alright now. Netbooks are so had to type with- UGH if I have any typing errors, it's not my fault. I did want more though- maybe it wasn't possible with the amazing time frame for the updates, but I rather wanted more action.

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH (super loud high-pitched girly scream) I can NOT believe you left off there!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How can you leave this unfinished?!?!??!!?! It's AMAZING~ I loved the parts especially where it said "Shut it, Dad" before arriving at the Dursley's, "She would go off the deep end if there were two Snapes under the roof" (yes I know that's probably a somewhat innacurate quote) and...uh...some other Dursley quote but I still loved it!!!

Okay, now that the J'adore ("I adore" in French) comments are over...I am really disapponted in Harry's lack of faith in his sister, even though he doesn't know about the blood tie. I also thought that they would bond a bit more over the summer while they lived together. Ofcourse, with his close relationship with Dumbledore, I can also see why he would be blinded by pain and anger (etc.).

Now, I also have questions- first off, the twin thing. HOW did Harry and Apolla come out at the same time with TWO different fathers?! I mean, it's crazy- and near impossible. I GUESS (sorry, I don't think italics work here or I would have used that instead) if they were not identical twins and were...uhh...the other type of twin where the egg doesn't split (fraternal?) then that would work? Still, the chances are slim and technically, it can't REALLY be proven if Apolla is Snape's daughter or not, unless with some magic spell, or if they technically were supposed to be identical twins, then Harry could technically be Snape's kid or part Snape. It is SO confusing, as you can see from my paragraph of speculations, so do tell me how you came up with THAT idea.

Alright, overall...I love the idea of Snape's daughter. I figured it out halfway through the first chapter- at first I thought it was Voldemort, then ruled it out. Then I thought...powerful knowledgable person that isn't Voldemort? Dumbledore! Then I decided EWW that's gross it has to be someone else. Three time's a charm! I think it was portrayed wonderfully, and I like the equal mix in personality for Apolla. I'm so envious of how you were able to simply develop her character and bring her to life- I usually base my main characters off of myself and don't get very far, but I don't know how else to write them.

I, ofcourse, laughed with probably countless other readers about the potions. That was good. I also think that Parkinson deserved a good punch in the face- why didn't she get one?! Or 100?! Really now. Ron deserved a good few knocks to the head too- I'd suggest a bludger, but there might not be enough braincells left for his head, with all that hypocrisy swimming around. I really do DESPISE hypocrites like that. I can't believe he managed to turn Harry. That's horrible.

More questions: What happened to her owl, Willow? Did Dudley ever write after that one time? What about Apolla confronting McGonagall (well not as much confronting as meeting up with in a sly manner, but still) about the Order? Did Apolla have any further correspondence with Hermione? [Are Draco and Apolla ever going to have that sexy steamy makeout that's been coming for over 40 chapters?]

PLEASE don't kill Snape- I know mostly everything you've done adds up well to the general plot, but you have altered many things and it just isn't right to kill her father. Seriously. What happened to Dobby after that one time? (No way I'm letting you kill him either- that's just not fair)

It's 4:45 and I didn't really sleep last night so I can't think of much more to write, except please update and let me know what you thought of my comment!

Loved the update. I really think you should play up the Draco/Apollonia relationship. Can't wait to see what will happen next! :)

Awh that was cuute <3 i cant wait to see whats next.
Love Love Love this storyyyy!

Amazing as always. It's nice to see a bit of what Draco is thinking and feeling.

Oh my god, I love the pissed of Snape. Your update was really good and I can't wait to see the outcome of Snape confronting the Carrows yet again.

Oh my god, I love the pissed of Snape. Your update was really good and I can't wait to see the outcome of Snape confronting the Carrows yet again.

Woot such fight in this one. I loved the update and can't wait to see what happens next.

I am completely inlooooooooooove with this story! Everytime i see you update i drop what im doing just to reeead! Im sosososososososososososooooooo excited to read mooore. And i hope a little bit more blossoms in Apollonia's and Draco's relationship. This is like the best Draco/Harry Porry fanfic ive read and that saying something cause ive read ALLOOOT. Anyways im sorry about this long comment. But i had to get that all out. <333333 Update soooooon!!

i love the way you write. it's amazing.
the only thing i'm having trouble coming to terms with is how she and harry are the same age with different fathers. some sort of spell or something? maybe you should elaborate :') (i'm only on chapter 22, so if i come across it, i'll feel like a right prick)

I love Draco and Apollonia's relationship. And it's interesting how everything's comming together. Good job! Update soon! :)

Amazing. Draco was always a favorite character of mine and I love seeing how you nail his character down.