I love this! the story is really good and its all developing nicely. ...but i cant help but wonder when/if Apollonia and Draco will finally get together lol! :) Update soon!!!
You would think that Apollonia's presence at the Burrow would make it slightly obvious that she was on the opposite side of her father. Ron is being a very dense monkey hypocrite, while Harry is also being unfair. Not everyone turns out like their parent, a fact in which Harry needs to realize soon before he faces the risk of losing his half sister.
I'm loving the new chapters. Harry is so...well, a bit of an idiot. Surely he should put two and two together and guess that she is his sister. After all, why else would she be in Privet drive? I know it's going to get even more interesting soon...keep updating! Aww, Draco really cares about her!!!
It saddens me about both Apollonia and Draco's situation. It unfair to the both of them, even though both of them realize that it's for the better. Someone needs to smack Harry upside the head with a broomstick. It's ridiculous how he doesn't understand the underlining reason as to why Apollonia is at Pivet Drive with him.
This was a rather depressing chapter to say the least. The identity of Apollonia's mother needs to be revealed to Harry and Ron soon. She really has nothing to go back for if Hogwarts reopens once more. It was nice to see that Draco wanted to see her once more. It seems that he does have feelings for her like she does for him. Maybe her father is aware of this? Which ever the case may be, it seems rather hopeless that they will end up together, or that Apollonia will have anyone left to turn to while when this is over. Please update soon. I'm anxious to see how Harry will take her being at Pivet Drive with him for the amount of time he is there.
It sucks that she lost her father and Draco at the exact same time. She must tell Harry that he is her sibling. I think it would end up being easier on her and if Draco would know he would understand. Things have just turned much more complicated. But, Ron should just learn to trust her instead of keeping his stereotype of Slytherins.
Revenge is always sweet, and it impressed me that she would do that to Pansy. Glad her father didn't punish her that badly for it. Pansy needed to get what was coming to her.
I like how you mix what happens in the book with your story. It gives it a certain essence that to me feels like it could be a side book from the Harry Potter series.